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How can I lie? It's a great story. However, in your character's backstory, he has a deep friendship with kagaya, so will kagaya be the love interest, or will he ever free her from her imprisonment or what? You can't just say that they're good friends in his backstory, and for his whole, reason to leave was to find her and yet not free her it feels like a big loophole. Since he should have the power to free her already and doesn't need to wait for anything or anyone.

If we're talking about hit time skip, I believe that's a racial ability and yes, with enough power, you can suppress some hacks, but at the same time someone has weake as bobbity. Was able to control someone second only to beers the destroyer. majin boo was able to turn vegeto into candy. even though he was weaker. That shows no matter how powerful your key is or body. With a strong enough spell you can be defeated even in dragon ball dimaima , the man who created the dragon ball multiverse used magic. even when goku and vegeta went to the demon realm. The demons didn't know what kai was. or how to use it. It shows that kai came to much later down the line. Your welcome look up the time magic came up in dragon Ball.

That was a great chapter. I just have one question. Has the black dragon been weakened during his travel to the dragon ball world? I'm asking because it took zerf gaining the power to rewrite the time line. of the entire universe. Giving him the confidence to face the black dragon. P s most dragon ball characters , whether it is dragon ball,dragon ball Z, dragon ball GT, dragon ball Dima, dragon ball Super. Have no magical resistance or very little. Take the fight between vegeto and boohan or the dragon balls how they were able to turn the Z fighters into children without any resistance. Most hacks from dragon ball are magic.

Why is it always gender swap?............

It has potential hope to see more 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😁

if you're going to give him a love interest make it android 18. Reasons why he only knew of bloodshed and battle. And she was born only knowing bloodshed in battle i feel like the two could help each other move on.

please update 🙏 more

The weakest form of the black dragon that we've seen is capable of blowing up an island in one move with that alone, he's on par with an ancient weapon. Not only that, he's able to devour all elements.Which means no elemental attack could harm him. Andy was dating any story, he got all of the black dreams, powers Which makes it frustrating to see how weak he is.

please don't drop this there so many Wind and Air users in fiction take Yuno from Black clover. or Wendy from Fairy Tail and these are just a few, the amount of moves and abilities. You can give them are numerous.But please make him work for it. I Want to see him grow into the strongest, not become it. There is a difference in How they view Other People. They grow into their strength , they are humble and wiser due to knowing the cost of strength. if they just become the strongest, they look down on others. And makes somebody dumbest mistakes they believe that just because they know the story, they are smarter and better, which is not true, they fail to realize that they are not in a fantasy, but reality.... That's all hope to see more.

I went to your patreon, but there are now advantaged chapters so why should I pay 20$ for something I can't use.