I will also say I am in fact not a 'rookie,' I was just crossposting and didn't notice the mistake. I've been writing for eight or nine years. Thank you again for pointing it out, though.

I will say thanks for pointing the thing out about the copied chapter thing. the first 15 chapters or so were reposted from other sites I was posting this story on. I'm not sure why you're referring to "the author" as if you're not addressing "the author" directly right now. I appreciate the comment, thank you for reading