Sirawish_Muttamara

I am worried about the inner voice plot. I hope it goes well.

I hope there aren't too many instances of taking advantage of the heroine just like he did with Mai or even Eriri. I feel bad about it.

And that's what saddens me most about this fanfic. Because in the end, Asia still had to become Rias's devil slave. I also think she should become a other species than a demon, such as an angel or a flügel (exemple: the flügel in No Game No Life)

Thx for da chap!!

According to my understanding The characters that we readers are currently following NOT the main protagonist of this fanfic. But they are two main characters from two Chinese novels, Yang Chen and Yun Che. I think that Yang Chen was able to ignore the rules of cliche Chinese novels in the ATG's world because Yang Chen was a character from another novel, not Yun Che. I'm not sure if he also had Yun Che's memories from Azure Cloud Continent or not. That make him ignore ATG's plot. But don't know how much ploy he can ignore. (The real Yun che is selfish and pedophila, so i don't think he can control himself in that situation) He has the personalities of three people in one body. And his main personality was Yang Chen. Yun Che was only a secondary personality. And the last personality hasn't woken up yet. He is still Yang Chen in the MWIABCEO novel. So he was forced to do those stupid plots. That makes him still act stupid like those boring Chinese novels only in the MWIABCEO's world. That's why I hope he will wake his unknown personality to avoid those stupid and boring plots. Because the unknown personality should be the true protagonist of this fanfic and he know the plot of this 2 cliche Chinese novel.

Since I saw that, The protagonist is going to deliver food to his wife at her company. I already know what will happen after this. And I believe every reader knows it as well as I do. After this, it will be a slap in the face role. There are stupid characters who appear to show off their wealth and insult the protagonist. And then the protagonist slapped him in the face. After that, the heroine will appear and end the problem. I just hope, can the author spoil it for me a little? Do you intend to follow in the footsteps of those boring Chinese novels? If yes, please tell me in how many chapter will this face-slapping chapter end? I'll skip ahead and read it after this plot end. I can wait for 2-3 week for update until this face-slapping chapter end and read it in one go. I hope, our protagonist will not follow boring Chinese novels. But they were Yang Chen and Yun Che, The Boring Chinese novel protagonist. It was difficult for him to overcome the rules of boring Chinese novels. Except that the third mysterious entity within him would awaken. I agree that this fanfic is very interesting. And I'm willing to follow. But I can't help but feel bored. If you have to read the same content over and over that can be found in every Chinese urban novel. And I just want to ask, when The unknown ID will awake?

Oh wow!! it's Hime-chan!!! To be honest, She is one of my favorite characters in FGO. I really surprise that it was her, and never though about her in fanfic at all. Because I've never seen her in any fan fiction.

Thx for da chap!!! Let's Going to Ophis!!

Scathach : fate/grand order His skill and ability quite overpowered. But it's seem that he lacks of combat experience, he need to learn a lot of thing to mastery his own skill and ability.

Why can't be harem????? Just have a big HAREM!!!