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- Karito_9 months agoReplied to Donagha
I couldnt continue the current plot. So Im scrapping it and using a different character.
- Karito_9 months agoPosted
Yello. I'm Karito. Check out my novel. Give feedback. I usually post Sundays since its the only day I actually have time to write. So relax and enjoy the chapters once a week.
- Karito_9 months agoCommented
You know what would be interesting to see. If in a scenario where Rosaline is hurt, and Jasper is around, you can make Jasper go pale. Everyone around would ask whats wrong, and Jasper would say, that normally, he would barely feel any emotions from Gabriel, but now all he feels is rage. Like an amount he's never ever seen before. You can play around with this idea if you wish. Great story up till now
- Karito_a year agoReplied to Dhaliwal2
Why though? Whats the point of de-ageing for an hour?
- Karito_a year agoReplied to Quin_Bland
Give me some slack guys, I'm an idiot.
- Karito_2 years agoCommented
Brother give it another shot. Dont worry about the break. I dont know about you but I got kind of lazy and couldn't find the inspiration to continue.
- Karito_2 years agoCommented
wait did he kiss her on her cheek or hair?
- Karito_2 years agoReplied to The_reader_ofnovel
He's trying to keep Toph far away from Zuko. The offence its self isn't that wrong. Just an overprotective father.
- Karito_2 years agoPosted
Hey guys, shameless author here to give himself a good review. This a different version of ATLA as my previous one ended as a failure. Hope you enjoy...
- Karito_2 years agoReplied to Donagha
thx
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