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ReaderofStorys26dPostedI like the pretty unique idea of an obscurus MC. It is also great that u don’t take the usual route of an Harry Potter fanfic where harry takes one of the main plot spots but expand upon the more unexplored nuances of the Harry Potter world. The emotional turmoil inside the MC is also pretty well done. Not the usual “I am so super cold because I am the only person who ever suffered and now I will k*ll everybody because I am angry at the world”, but a Charakter who got close to broken and is trying to heal. Overall it is a story I would recommend, as it seems like the author is very thoughtful about how one could expand on the universe most Harry Potter fans came to appreciate, while giving us a unique and interesting story. To the author: I hope u continue writing this story :)
- ReaderofStorys3mthCommented
Justin -> Ernie
"Alright. While Justin seems to have been affected the same as the other victims, something... different has occurred to Nicholas here." I address the other two professors, deciding on how to go about dealing with the two layabouts here. "After having examined him, I have come to the conclusion that something very strange has happened to him. And to that effect, I recommend nobody touches him, and he is put in an isolated sealed room until Dumbledore can examine him." At my words, both professors looked over at Nick before nodding their heads, agreeing with my opinion. - ReaderofStorys3mthCommented
I think his mentally over twenty by now? Isn’t he acting very immature for that age? Instead of finding out why his first friend ever acting that coldly he is behaving like a real child. Like: you don’t talk to me so I don’t talk to you, but even more
James' gaze fixed on Emily, who had no group, but he remembered how blunt she was with him today at breakfast. So he decided not to invite her to his group. - ReaderofStorys3mthReplied to lobsterinc_he_n
Snape, Snape, Severus Snape….
"I'll remind you that one of my best friends was in that house." - ReaderofStorys4mthCommented
Must say I’m a bit surprised he uses that spell after what happens to his dad? I think he schools be able to hurt someone without using the spell that turned his father braindead.
"Crucio!" - ReaderofStorys6mthReplied to Ronin46
I think the author even said somewhere that he’s playing with the idea to make them a throuple but he hasn’t decided yet. I am simply of the opinion that I like the relationship between Malia and Tristan without Alison more, because her joining would make their relationship seem less important. I mean they pretty much became human for each other, how do they develop a relationship that strong with a third person who didn’t went through the same with them? But that is just my opinion:)
"He's pretty shaken up but I think he'll be dragging Scott to help sniff her out after school." Allison said, sitting on top of Tristan's desk while Malia sat on his lap, none of them caring for the stray gazes sent their way. "Think it's the Alphas?" - ReaderofStorys6mthReplied to Ronin46
Why would he want her? He seems very happy beeing with Malia. Just because Allison has a hardcore crush doesn’t mean he is interested in her
"He's pretty shaken up but I think he'll be dragging Scott to help sniff her out after school." Allison said, sitting on top of Tristan's desk while Malia sat on his lap, none of them caring for the stray gazes sent their way. "Think it's the Alphas?" - ReaderofStorys7mthReplied to Destroyer3000
Why is morph?
"Then what is Morph?" I ask. - ReaderofStorys10mthCommented
NF?
"I believe it to be an interesting form of jutsu," Takuma answered. "On the battlefield, the mind is often your strongest asset. It's a powerful place, and what you feed it can affect it in a powerful way. What can you trust more than your mind? How do you react when you realize that your mind was targeted and can be done so again? Moreover, rarity works to its advantage. I've conversed with many of my peers. Most of them can't cast a genjutsu. Most have opted to learn how to spot and dispel genjutsu— but even that is learned at varying levels. I know an exploitable gap in the 'market' when I see one." - ReaderofStorys1yrReplied to Silver_Chains
True
"She also doesn't have her tits falling out of her top and is such a meathead that she never plays up the cute stuff. Her brain is just one veiny muscle that counters the usual public perception. You won't have that." - ReaderofStorys1yrReplied to Kensei777
I‘ll do you one better, why is Pantu?
"Nearly 10 PM and you've got me here still, this had better be good Nezu..." Pantu says sharply, narrowing her eyes at the bear-mouse seating across from her desk. - ReaderofStorys1yrPosted