Ryan_Baroni

if i was Nick i would sell her for two Welps Spectres

(chapter 300)this novel has potential but the author kills it.The grammar is good when compared to others in webnovel and the author is indian so I praise him for that.The main characters are well designed, writed and developed.the world build is good, the authors spend hours hunting nice arts to show us his imaginations.but there is two big problems.He repeats explanations of power many times, prompting me to ask if he thinks we're stupid or a child, but that is tolerable.the second problem is what made me drop this a time ago, but i decided to give it a second chance:THE ABSURD AMOUNT OF REFERENCES.Do not think I'm the boring uncle who doen't like to see references to other arts but man, every 10 chapters, we have 6 references. There comes a time when it doens't work anymore, it becomes boring, irritating, cringe, annoying. This excitement that the author has with the references spoiled some parts of the story for me, such as: Kravel, the god of war, I liked how he was cool, unique and epic character, but the moment the authors jokes that he is kratos, i just lost that feeling, you know what i mean? This type of reference is what spoiled the experience for me.As for the cool type of references are the races of creatures the author does, its fun to research it and make predictions about its future powers. A good way to do references but make that not annoying, is like "hiding it" like you did with Kravel, doens't kill the feeling, and its cool when you discover it. but please do not tell us direcly! that make us to feel childish and unconfortable. Thats it, I needed to get this out of my chest, honestly.

i wish to know if the author dropped this

did the author droped?

Now its just one chapter a week. Do you know why?

I like this novel from the bottom of my heart, and it's been 3 months since the chaps update stopped and I'm afraid the author has dropped this story. I really love it so much and I don't have any news from the author, did something happen? I would be happy if you @DaoistZenFeng let us know what's going on!!