Joseph_Scully_7458

Great story concept and design. Very cloak and dagger. Can’t read anymore though I’ll wait until you decide which way to go with it as keeping tracking of your flow is causing a migraine. Can’t tell which chapter you kept an which was just the idea you had at the time but went away from it.

Fun story can’t wait to see updates 😜

Great story so far hope you pick it back up

Love the FL very adhd but it perfect can’t wait to keep reading.

It is a crazy story but it was worth the read highly recommend

That’s a great saying

Why does it matter? Stop overthinking.

Well done. Would recommend! Good pacing and world building

Book?

Not to ruin the character development here but why would they do this? I don’t understand the psychology of it. It all seems like her family is great until the end when they want her blood and all that I mean they had a good thing going why mess it up? Just wandering not really important for the story to be good.