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VeridianAK

VeridianAK

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2022-06-28 JoinedGlobal
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  • VeridianAK
    VeridianAK5 months ago
    Replied to VeridianAK

    understandable but still, when each tier only has 25 levels, the levels given directly by the system shouldn't exceed 2-3, making him gain them the hard way, Like how you did for the summon slot, with the soul fruit, it was better execution in my opinion, excessive (from 2 to 5) but better. Awakeners are already progressing on easy mode compared to the cultivators, you should make the mc earn each power-up the higher he advance. Rest, keep up the good work and take the initial comments lightly, it was just to point out how easy it is for him to evolve everything, like even if the mc doesn't do anything and stays at his home for 10-20-50 years, he can evolve himself to the peak.

  • VeridianAK
    VeridianAK5 months ago
    Replied to VeridianAK

    your story is great,(characters, world building, power system etc) except for the slow pace and word paddling. Cheat though, it's too broken and easy for the mc.

  • VeridianAK
    VeridianAK5 months ago
    Replied to VeridianAK

    on a more constructive note, whether you take it or not, make stuff a bit harder to get, it'll make it more engaging for the readers and might push your story a tier higher

  • VeridianAK
    VeridianAK5 months ago
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    [ System quest: sh*t once while standing reward: +5 levels Limited quest: sh*t 10 times in 10 minutes while standing reward: +25 levels Transcendent quest: sh*t 100 times in 60 minutes while standing reward: instant ascension to god-tier

  • VeridianAK
    VeridianAK2 years ago
    Replied to RealmWeaver

    one question i have, there are 1000 leaders and each have 1200 students under them, 1.2 million students in total, so how come the human population is in billions but 15 years old only amount to 1.2? you also mentioned ravenstein family has millions of people so how come there are only about a dozen 15year old in the academy

  • VeridianAK
    VeridianAK2 years ago
    Replied to RealmWeaver

    the story so far is fantastic hope you'll keep the tempo up. also, please don't make it a harem, not with his cousins atleast lastly, kael and ember, they make a perfect couple