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This is really entertaining. Unlike other fanfic this author has spent time to write the story. The framing of sentences, separation of paragraphs and excellent punctuation, makes it a good read. Keep the chapters coming.
Man , I always wished to have a version of Naruto where , he wasn't stupid , but a genius . I love that it is written with minimum errors in grammar ( whom I'm kidding , my grammar is worse XD ) . I like that your were updating it regularly without any fans . I hope the chapters could get longer . Anyways , it's a good one .
Bro , Do Not Drop ! It's really interesting , while other fanfic focus on ' Future Naruto ' trying to save sasuke from darkness , it's really interesting to see ' Future Sasuke ' trying to save himself and a different evil Naruto from Darkness . Best Parts till now : Slapping Sakura and insulting her . Suggestions : Let Naruto get stronger from normal means i.e. NO system for Naruto Desperate Sasuke for protecting themselves from Orochimaru . And Yes , don't make Orochimaru influence Naruto , giving him curse mark is pointless .