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  • vedant_khandait
    vedant_khandait1mth
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    Story's very nice but where is the mentality of the MC at, he got gamers mind which should have removed his naive ness also you made him kill like a million people in the illusion so i think he should be more desensitized to killing. But overall the story's fantastic and one of the better ATG fanfics I've read

    Ch 15 Chapter 15 : White Tiger Trial Final
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    Human Of Rise In Against The Gods
    Anime & Comics · Akasaki_Ryujin
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    vedant_khandait5mth
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    Streamer in the Omniverse
    Anime & Comics · Calleum_Artori
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  • vedant_khandait
    vedant_khandait9mth
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    very nice book hoping for more chapters and regular updates

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    Marvel Mutant in DC
    Anime & Comics · superman1265789
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  • vedant_khandait
    vedant_khandait11mth
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    what does this even mean?! cant you just write "Demonic" or are you Chinese

    Black Magic: 9 (The Demon King Comes to Earth)
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    Hogwarts: The Way of the Dharma (Harry Potter)
    Book&Literature · Big_Big_0235
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    vedant_khandait11mth
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    i dont understand the refrences in this chapter and can you please aske someone to proofread your chapters

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
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    Hogwarts: The Way of the Dharma (Harry Potter)
    Book&Literature · Big_Big_0235
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  • vedant_khandait
    vedant_khandait1yr
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    The story is good but the pacing is a bit fast and the power scaling of the MC is broken. Like who has so many 1mil yrs spirit rings and the other characters are also broke but manageable

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    Douluo Dalu System
    Book&Literature · The_Virgin
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