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Thank you so much for taking the time to do a second review. It means a lot! I'm glad you like it <3

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Thank you so much for your review! I intend to run the entire work through for grammar mistakes again, once it's finished, but if you could give me an example, I'll go correct it right away. :) The different parts have been split up into smaller paragraphs several times, but I do understand that if you're reading it on a phone, it will seem heavier. Thank you again.

Some of the longer conversations can get a little confusing, but overall it's well done. [img=recommend]

Interesting plot and a well paced storyline - very creative and different from what I usually read. It definitely has potential and I think you can attract a wide audience with this concept.

This is VERY different from what I usually read, but it's an interesting concept. The world-building is well developed and it is generally written in a way that makes it flow nicely.

Well written story with an interesting plot that seems to gradually develop as the story progresses. Can defenitely recommmend! Sidenote: some of the conversation bits can be a little confusing, but other than that, it's promising.

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