Man you trying to copy the Top g Andrew Tate

I Don't know why the fk every author writer has Against an orphan they are always pity full in the story but they are not treated like that in the society so stop doing this generic shit and get something new And yeah my english is not good

Just in few words I think the previous version is wayyy better man .As a reader of the previous version who has seen what Braun and his cheat can do I'm disappointed so I'mma drop it at 14 chapters