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I don't even think there's an actual story to read. Like, he just says the fanfic will only be posted on his patreon. He's just blatantly just giving out his patreon whilst not even providing an actual story to read. Before he already did this but started to atleast give 40 chapters to read before just blatantly giving out his patreon, but now there's absolutely nothing to read for free. Even I'm sure he does this for a living without a job anyway. Just scamming people and asking them to go to his patreon. And if he does actually make the fanfiction in his patreon, there's absolutely no use to it. At this rate you're better off just making your own fanfiction. The whole point of a fanfiction is for an author to create a brand new what if universe for the story. All he does is just insert an MC with a sex system and done. He has some skills of being an author because of his previous works, but other than that, absolutely nothing else to come. Like bro, if you really want money that bad just make a book or an actual novel and have it get officialized so you can earn money.
Author here! Just wanted to say hi, took me quite some time to actually know how to review my own Book. Also, this story is just made for fun and some of the characters actually are my friend, even the main character is.Also, I'M putting all of my efforts into making sure this will become a great story. I'll also take any kind of criticism in order to improve later chapters and update the current chapters to be better.
AN ORPHAN WITH NO MOTHER AND FATHER LIVING IN THE STREETS!!!
Best I can do it $1.0 In my country's money...
Amigo, por favor, I'm gonna cry 😢I thought this was gonna be a free novel...
I'm broke, please no...
Title Of The Chapters are: THIS STORY WILL BE EXCLUSIVE ect ect.Same thing for the content inside of it. He makes good stories, but overshadowed by his greed of money, he could become an actual author with his skills already but he chooses to monopolize off Patreon and use other accounts aswell.Though he probably continues the stories in his Patreon, it's not worth it.
Then what about choppers fruit? Pretty sure it's also called Human-Human Fruit.There most likely other Human-Human fruit out there aswell, just other variations like the mc has.
nvm, this got nerfed aswell
Then just make a potion that can make your body handle the powers you have thus making it so that you aren't nerfed meaning you'll be able to use your abilities to their full extent without waiting for a certain age/training to atchieve your full potential, a loop hooleee
Writing Quality: 4 (4 Because its readable, and just a few mistakes) Story Development: 4 ( cant't say much about story development since there's only 11 chapters so far and mo fighting scenes aswell)Character Design: 5 (honestly, i just feel like its the right one cant't put my finger into it but hope its actually correct)Updating Stability: 3 (I dont't know if the author writes for fun when he's only bored but yeah, atleast not mass releasing with bad quality)World background: 4 (only the mha world so far and nothing mentioned about his old world)
It'll probably cost more to repair than to replace ngl
yeah, a very bad combo ngl but hope nothing bad happens