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The novel story gatting intersting but there are some grammar mistakes in this novel to but it acceptable i guess i like this nove land story keep the good work

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Yes now Novel are readable i can see some changes on major mistakes but there are still minor mistakes but it acceptable Keep good work also I like this novel

yes i guess now it readable

Tusi novel is kind of unique because i read other novel but they are from morden world or cultivation world but this novel is in magic fantasy world with Kindom i like it a lot

Story's 30 chapter are ended i like a story where is going and i want to next chapters to see the what kind of story it is now we can check it out

yes i like it where stroy are going

I am huge fan of this kind of novel I alredy read this novel i like it i want more Chapters Tusi has some grammar mistakes but it can magable i like the story keep the good work

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This novel i read from the start and i quite like it one of the best part is twist that in chapter 20 i like it ,i very exited about the next chapter

i can't wait for the next chapter keep the good work

i first time hear the story of protagonist in the novel