Why did the Observer assemble this team if the Living Tribunal is responsible for protecting the Multiverse?! Something fishy is going on here!

Oh, I also hope MC takes Alice Longbotom for himself. I remember in some ff she was colorfully described as: a tall, mature, black-haired, overweight beauty - a seductress. At the moment the author is making Frank an idiot, so I hope she leaves him.

I already forgot, someone remind me if there is a reason why Voldemort was resurrected so early? I remember that the Universe was slightly adjusted so that Nymphodora and Harry were the same age, but I thought that was all (And Dracula’s family).

Can I have some brief overview of what happened in the previous chapters, otherwise I’ve already forgotten everything during this time.

It's all so stupid

Too chaotic and not enough context. I didn't like this style even if it was added for variety. Looks a lot like unnecessary filler.

A continuation that the author forgot: As a skeptic, I want to say that you should not trust everything Dumbledore says and does. It is quite possible that after Voldemort's final death, you too will meet your death in some random way or leave the scene under the influence of love potions and then Dumbledore will remain the only surviving war hero and the person with the highest level of power in the country.

Awww (That was such a great moment! (Something like: “-I agree to tell you how I ended up in this timeline and I can swear on my magic. -And? -I died!” Then he might not have to pay)))

Is this filler or some kind of annotation? I've seen longer scrambled egg recipes!

Until chapter 4 everything was pretty average. In chapter 4, the author ruined everything completely! (Tag Yuri!)

Well, the author clearly showed how to ruin an entire work in one paragraph. It would be better if the author did not lock them in the book space, but left them with the MC. I read a similar work, “Potter’s luck,” and although the quality of the writing was much worse, the author ruined everything in the same way.

Such a board with these jokes and mockery in all HP works! However, everything is solved very simply! In this case, Severus stands up during dinner in the presence of the headmaster and professors and says: “I Severus Prince swear by mother magic that if a wand is simply pointed at me NOT during classes or official duels, that wand and the hand holding the wand will be completely destroyed before atoms by me personally, SO BE IT!”

Such a board with these jokes and mockery in all HP works! However, everything is solved very simply! In this case, Severus stands up during dinner in the presence of the headmaster and professors and says: “I Severus Prince swear by mother magic that if a wand is simply pointed at me NOT during classes or official duels, that wand and the hand holding the wand will be completely destroyed before atoms by me personally, SO BE IT!”

Oh no, I didn’t hint that you were quitting your work, it’s just that, in my experience, many authors quit their good jobs for some reason and I’m preparing for the worst in advance) + after buying the apartment, Peter didn’t mention or remember the realtor, you forgot her ? That’s why I wrote such a comment to unobtrusively remind you that she exists and on cold lonely nights she often remembers a young, rich, sexy client!)

I have a feeling that the author will abandon this ff before Parker meets again with the realtor who sold him the apartment. Or before moving forward with his relationship with Liz Allan.

And in Chapter 15 (the big one), our OP MC almost lost in a duel to his peer, what exactly is his OP and when will it show up? Maybe he should stay in the Muggle world? Among Muggles he can certainly be considered OP!!!

The author even made my sweet Daphne Greengrass a bitch!!!

I hate so much that James and Dumbledore are the complete culprits of everything that happened, but almost everyone turns a blind eye to this, and MC apparently is not going to take revenge on them!

I just started reading this elsewhere and I already hate it! I hate ffs where almost all the characters are bastards and the reader has to hate almost all the characters and the author for writing it! I hate that adults play mind games with a WEAK child and a helpless mother. The description says that the MC is OP, but in the first 10 chapters this is not the case and I hate it! Etc.