MC like a majority of humanity is hypocritical. He didn't factor to feel attachment for no one since in his old life and a majority of his new life quite detached. Being able to 'connect' with people again is more significant to him. He lacked attachment in both lives making the one he attains all the more important. MC would burn the world for those he cares about while Phantom wouldn't. He is not being a 'Soy Boy', a soy boy would complain and have emotions all over the place. He instead rationalized his emotions and is acting on them. Is it 'Soy Boy' behavior to take care of things that matter to you? It is not.

How so?

Like this but without feet and baby sized

With Red Eyes

If I add characters of other works they are essentially OC's anyway. Their story is NOT the same as their original work. The only aspect that remain similar are their looks and some aspects of their powers. For example: Sheffield is a minor antagonist from a niche series that has the opposite personality she has now. I will not be spamming characters from other franchises but do expect some to pop up every once in a while.

Same, I dropped it in the "School Festival Arc". I just couldn't watch it anymore. For me MHA had a lot of potential but sadly dropped the ball after the Tournament Arc.

I saw a video where someone actually brokedown MHA timeline 'logically' and apparently the first quirk occurred more than 150+ years before Deku. Quirk users grew exponentially meaning that for a long time quirk users were rare. Like 1% rare and then as they mingled that number grew to 2 and then 4 and so on.

It will be explained in a flashback some chapters ahead. Also, MC's brain is that of a child and it can only hold limited information.

They are child soldiers for a reason. Molding and controlling a child is much easier than an adult. If you take into account that the children one way or another are brainwashing proof, it is even more difficult to control them. Similar to our own reality, the teenage years are when children get the more rebellious and the Association can't have a wildcard running around like them. They could babble their secrets or even expose them to the media.

With enough training and improvement, he can morph into pretty much anything. His base form is the one that requires less energy to maintain itself and when MC runs out he would preferably adopt that form.

Its doable, but the MC must have a lot of 'energy' in order to do that. And if I do that the MC would be overpowered and make the story meaningless. I want MC to be powerful and versatile but weak enough to recognize the need of other people. In other words he won't reach all might level of strength for a LONG TIME if at all.

Yes

You don't have to give me pats on my back. You just don't have to rate my novel 2.5 when it isn't that bad. The premise is good, the potential is there, I was planning of adding the important events either "on chapter or in Aux". I am just not going to expand in every little event there is. I even re-read everything to see if it really was that bad. It wasn't, yeah I have some plot holes that I have to 'edit' but that's it. Regarding the MC's change of personality, if you actually read and compare his "behavior" with his past self is almost the same. You took everything at face value. You being an author should know to always look deeper. Not everything, is quid pro quo what the characters say. The characters point of view are often biased and flawed in ALL stories not only mine. Regarding the thing about "not doing my own timeline", no shit. This is a fanfic of MHA not a whole new creation like your Novel. I shouldn't be required to wordbuild every little detail to be able to tell my story. Even if the timeline wasn't mine I twisted it enough to fit my story so that is worldbuilding. I don't have to write everything from scratch if my timeline was going to be similar anyways. This book doesn't even have 3 weeks since I published it and you are already are writting it off as a 'let down/failure'. Then what about your own novel, it has been out for quite a few months I have read 10 chapters of your fabled "world building" and your MC feels static as if he had not progressed. Whats the point of having thousands of words dedicated to worldbuilding when the story is a slow as a snail and boring. From what I get from your own novel you like to "Worldbuild" and expand a lot to a point were you even expand the 'extras' to an absurd degree. What is the point of expanding on people that are only going to appear a couple of times in comparison to the main cast. It takes a lot of time that could actually be used for plot, character development or other things. I also noted that you are excessively descriptive to the point of boring me (that's a lot).(I am not shiting on your story this is an honest review.) The important takeaway is that even when I disliked your writting style I didn't leave a shit review because it wasn't my cup of tea. I could have been an asshole but I wasn't, after all you baited me into an epic adventure, 10 chaps later, nothing. There is a difference between doing a "real" review and being an asshole.

She can't since the chip is quite small and is 'physically' inside his head. She doesn't have the tools for that task. None of them actually.