Ferzd

You should have killed Draven and or Lilith. It would have made that devil a lot more... personal? no not quite but still. I know you have more in plan for them but it would have been better to have that encounter actually means something to the characters ig. I mean it's still your story and it's good but... Killing a devil that honestly most of the audience doesn't give a shit about is pretty meh. And doesn't really do anything. Even killing Lilith wouldn't have had an impact honestly. Azazel should be alive but Draven should be dead. Anyways, have a nice day. I hope I don't across as annoying or anything. I'm just saying.

Time and time again, I am surprised by the quality of writing in this fic. This fic takes itself seriously, something that most others are afraid to do. The character interactions, dialogues and plot points are always on point. The only complaint I had with the story was in the middle of the story where the rat guy's conflict with the MC felt forced. And even that is kind of a nitpick. Anyway, I hope your fic gets the recognition it deserves on other sites. I know how demotivating it feels sometimes when writing feels like screaming at the void. So, I want you to know your fic is the only reason I haven't completely deleted webnovel and moved on from reading fanfics. Hope you have a good day.

I mean, looking at the top-rated novels on the site paints a rather clear picture of the targeted demography of WN. Also, you are right, TBATE's fandom is pretty small now. I haven't read a chapter in a long time and I don't plan to either, heard too many bad things. But still, this ff was pretty refreshing, you should try your hand at writing originals as well. I am sure you'd do well.

I wonder who you will pair with Solid... I mean it's AstaXNoelle, DorothyXNozel and probably ZoraXNebra. But there are no female characters around Solid's age that make sense. If you're taking spinoffs as well there is that moon magic one. Looking at the story till now, it is obvious that romance is your strongest aspect writing-wise so let's see where you take this. Thank you for the chapter

Woah, this is good like really good. This is better written than half the original novels on this site. Why is this not the highest-ranked ff on this site wtf? What kind of wizardry is this? Did you piss off the webnovel admin or something?

Of course, it wouldn't be a webnovel if it didn't have cheap face slapping. I am genuinely curious why it's even so prevalent, I don't think anyone actually enjoys that. The rest is fine tho.

Multiple times in this novel, Acier and Sebastian have said that they hate snakes, which is kinda weird cause Solid's whole thing is Sea snakes. (Well it was probably done that way to make him inferior to Noelle's Sea Dragon but still) Snakes are very related to health and alchemy so I hope you do something with that. Anyways been a while since I read a fanfic, and damn the quality has increased quite a bit. Hope you're doing good. Thank you for the chapter.

Honestly me neither. But I can't think of anyone. I am half tempted to make Secre the FL or maybe I might age down someone else. The problem is that I don't like large age gaps. But romance isn't the main focus of the series anyway so... I don't know.

I have no idea

As much as I like mereleona, she is like ten-fifteen years older than him.