Manohar_krishna
of reading
33
Read books
I don't like your discord server, it's trash and filled with retards but you are good I gotta fill the word limit yoho togk dhzbeshsb hsjsns
This is my first time writing a review, I don't really like to write one but this book forced me Author, pls don't change the POV jumps, it's very unique, your work is like that of Sanderson( although the writing quality is not half as good) What I mean by the above statement is that we can't skim through things, The first couple of chaps were quite good, but the next four had a lot of action and less dialogue After 7 the characters had a spark of life within them, I read the comment in chapter 11 that you are doing this for fun so please don't change your writing style because of the other reviews