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Manohar_krishna

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  • Manohar_krishna
    Manohar_krishna3 years ago
    Replied to Nuah_Zuah

    What does that mean? I am talking about characters you are talking about trees

  • Manohar_krishna
    Manohar_krishna3 years ago
    Posted

    Brother suyang has taught me many things that I would never forget, my little brother has done a nice job, I like it and recommend it, lets pluck the yin

  • Manohar_krishna
    Manohar_krishna3 years ago
    Posted

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  • Manohar_krishna
    Manohar_krishna3 years ago
    Posted

    I don't like your discord server, it's trash and filled with retards but you are good I gotta fill the word limit yoho togk dhzbeshsb hsjsns

    This book has been deleted.
  • Manohar_krishna
    Manohar_krishna3 years ago
    Posted

    Finally a novel worth my time, this thing is good I recommend it, it has a slow start but the world building compensates that it's magic system is vvv good, I like it

  • Manohar_krishna
    Manohar_krishna3 years ago
    Commented

    Better than the last fanfic I read

  • Manohar_krishna
    Manohar_krishna3 years ago
    Posted

    If you want to write a fanfic at least have some originality, you are a copy cat who copied and pasted chapter, I am disappointed with this but I will still read it because the story is different at the end

  • Manohar_krishna
    Manohar_krishna3 years ago
    Replied to Manohar_krishna

    What about references? When will you upload the rest of them?

  • Manohar_krishna
    Manohar_krishna3 years ago
    Posted

    This is my first time writing a review, I don't really like to write one but this book forced me Author, pls don't change the POV jumps, it's very unique, your work is like that of Sanderson( although the writing quality is not half as good) What I mean by the above statement is that we can't skim through things, The first couple of chaps were quite good, but the next four had a lot of action and less dialogue After 7 the characters had a spark of life within them, I read the comment in chapter 11 that you are doing this for fun so please don't change your writing style because of the other reviews