Jacob_X

The story is great at the beginning, Harry learning magic with Hermione a fair bit before Hogwarts, However, despite being sorted into Ravenclaw with Hermione, the author still went for the rememberball scene which is confusing because the flight lessons should of been split between houses ( Gryffindor & Slytherin) ( Ravenclaw and Hufflepuff) for whatever reason all the houses except Hufflepuff were present and despite not having any prior interaction with Hagrid, the Author decided for Harry to meet and befriend Hagrid so he can give plot clues. All in all if you plan on changing the plot, it shouldn't line up so closely with the original.

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It honestly hadn't crossed my mind until now to leave this a review, its obviously peak.

I would like more of this

So precious

So much better than I was expecting, freaking awesome