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  • smokeinalleys_1
    smokeinalleys_11yr
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    This story is the definition of heartbreak. Its so amazingly written that it is sure to leave you in tears by the end of the book. Highly recommend it!! The characters have been so well projected you almost feel like it's real life based. Amazing work I say!!

    Diary of a broken soul
    LGBT+ · Cris_The_Weirdo
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  • smokeinalleys_1
    smokeinalleys_11yr
    Commented

    What would I have done? I'd try to make things right, I guess what the brother is doing cause there is really no way of bringing a dead back to life. This is just so sad...

    Ch 8 I'm so sorry...
    Diary of a broken soul
    LGBT+ · Cris_The_Weirdo
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  • smokeinalleys_1
    smokeinalleys_11yr
    Commented

    This is saddd...Re reading it...and its so sad still..

    He waited while reading the diary of a broken soul.
    Diary of a broken soul
    LGBT+ · Cris_The_Weirdo
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  • smokeinalleys_1
    smokeinalleys_11yr
    Commented

    Ah heavens...I'm not crying, you are!!!!

    "I'm so sorry… I'm so sorry… please… I will make it better… I swear I will… please, wake up, please" he kept saying but his only answer was the beeping of the machines decorating the room.
    Diary of a broken soul
    LGBT+ · Cris_The_Weirdo
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  • smokeinalleys_1
    smokeinalleys_11yr
    Commented

    Too bad it's too late...

    He was going to make sure this time was different.
    Diary of a broken soul
    LGBT+ · Cris_The_Weirdo
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  • smokeinalleys_1
    smokeinalleys_11yr
    Commented

    Ignored it....he ignored it!!!!!

    Her brother walks towards her room. He needs to apologize; he needs to earn forgiveness. Deep down, he knew, he noticed the way his parents acted around her. He knew how lonely she was but decided to ignore it.
    Diary of a broken soul
    LGBT+ · Cris_The_Weirdo
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  • smokeinalleys_1
    smokeinalleys_11yr
    Commented

    Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

    I hope I don't open my eyes again… goodbye my dear confident … it wasn't long but… I was happy writing in your pages
    Diary of a broken soul
    LGBT+ · Cris_The_Weirdo
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  • smokeinalleys_1
    smokeinalleys_11yr
    Commented

    HER PARENTS ARE SO MEANNNNNNN

    "Don't be dramatic" they said "She's better off with your brother. Sweetie let's be honest. Two girls can't make it out in the real world. She's better with him. Don't be selfish, be happy for them".
    Diary of a broken soul
    LGBT+ · Cris_The_Weirdo
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  • smokeinalleys_1
    smokeinalleys_11yr
    Commented

    Congratulated them!!!?

    You know the worse part? My parents congratulated them… but I… I couldn't. For the very first time in my whole life… I snapped at my parents.
    Diary of a broken soul
    LGBT+ · Cris_The_Weirdo
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  • smokeinalleys_1
    smokeinalleys_11yr
    Commented

    Rather than fighting it, they should've set things right first. For one maybe end things with her rather than cheat on her.

    They looked at me with what I think was guilt, my brother put on his pants, and she covered herself with a sheet…They walked towards me saying sorry over and over again. They explained how they tried to fight the attraction, how they didn't want to hurt me.
    Diary of a broken soul
    LGBT+ · Cris_The_Weirdo
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  • smokeinalleys_1
    smokeinalleys_11yr
    Commented

    She really believed in both of them. They just walked all over her trust like that.

    Ch 5 Day 36
    Diary of a broken soul
    LGBT+ · Cris_The_Weirdo
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  • smokeinalleys_1
    smokeinalleys_11yr
    Commented

    Oh poor baby ...😢

    Does she not love me anymore? No… let's stop thinking this. I'm sure I'm just being pessimist as always. She said she loves me, I have to trust her… I need to believe in her and my brother.
    Diary of a broken soul
    LGBT+ · Cris_The_Weirdo
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  • smokeinalleys_1
    smokeinalleys_11yr
    Commented

    Worst of all yes...he does have everything. This is very sad...

    Please don't take her away, please… brother… you have everything. Everything… but I only have her.
    Diary of a broken soul
    LGBT+ · Cris_The_Weirdo
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  • smokeinalleys_1
    smokeinalleys_11yr
    Commented

    WHYYYYYYY...OH WHYYYYYYY....I KNOW IT MIGHT BE LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT BUT COME ON!!!

    We were talking in the dining room, and he arrived… they saw each other and smiled, that's not weird but… they saw at each other like they were the only ones around… I know… because that's how I see her.
    Diary of a broken soul
    LGBT+ · Cris_The_Weirdo
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  • smokeinalleys_1
    smokeinalleys_11yr
    Commented

    This I sad...

    Ch 3 Day 15
    Diary of a broken soul
    LGBT+ · Cris_The_Weirdo
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  • smokeinalleys_1
    smokeinalleys_11yr
    Commented

    Her saying she loved her back was just the worst part of it all.

    Her lips were so soft, we're dating now! She loves me too! She loves me! The useless average me!
    Diary of a broken soul
    LGBT+ · Cris_The_Weirdo
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  • smokeinalleys_1
    smokeinalleys_11yr
    Commented

    I'm here!!!!! ajajajaja...reading it, and loving it!!!!

    Ch 1 Day 1
    Diary of a broken soul
    LGBT+ · Cris_The_Weirdo
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