YesodVivrie

O cara baixou o Latrel

Dude, so he can replicate Medaka's The End, it's considered an ocular power, since she does better everything she "saw" someone else do. Stolen as hell

Bro, TU É BR??? NÉ?? SUSPEITEI DISSO NO MOMENTO DO "QUER PAU MAS NÃO SABE PEDIR"

It has a lot of potential, but it has no development whatsoever. No plot, no motivation, no dialogue, the chapters seem random. Man, like, very good idea, but if I were you I would rewrite all of this. Nothing makes sense, everything happens and nothing happens at the same time.

Okay, it seems interesting, but there are some mistakes that kill all the charm. 1° Great Red never intended to have the Dimensional Gap just for himself, he protects their dimension from outside threats. 2° Ophis who was causing problems against him because he likes to maneuver between dimensional holes and makes a lot of noise, as Ophis wants Silence, he wants to expel Baka Red from the Dimensional Gap. 3° Shalba may be arrogant as hell, but he would never have the courage to go against Ophis knowing that he can literally blow him to death. 4° Rizevim who creates the first contact of the old Satan faction with Ophis, Shalba, Katerea and the Creuserey comes later, Rizevim himself who speaks to Ophis to share her power with them.

Can you tell me the name in MTL?

no, but now, it's obvious that it's her

The original author didn't quite grasp the ideas and workings of the DD world. Su Yuntao isn't that blind, for god's sake, how does he know about the innate level 20 if the elders of the Spirit Hall hid the existence of Qian Renxue?? As a plant get elementary abilities when its original version was pure support?? The first ability is ok, but from the second one onwards it stopped being a plant spirit and became a "gain any ability I want" spirit. It doesn't make sense. I've read I've read many Chinese FFs of DD, and this is one of the most nonsensical ones I've ever read. Want to read a good one, Peerless Glory Angels, They all have evil intentions, This Tang San is Different, Lord of Gods, Jingtian Douluo, these just to name a few

Dude, what? It's a plant without the ice attribute, how did it get a freezing ability??? It doesn't make sense

Okay, Yuhao is a girl... Or he's gay... It doesn't matter, I respect him anyway