You have got to be kidding me, Novel and fans abandoned for a year and still have to buy privilege over 50 chapters that have already been read. That‘s pretty disrespectful to your readers, so: no thanks.

I‘m (temporarily) giving up on this one. Somehow no progress, no focussed storyline.

Well, this is not fun to read…only 2 chapters a week and these cruelties are all the author comes up with? Yes, the hunters would’nt be nice and have a cup of tea with him, but now it’s going overboard, enough allready.

Oh no :-( Not again. That‘s a bit boring…

Very mature. The pack has gone through atrocities for years, they’ve hardly get to know her, the daughter of the monster who did all that, she’s been gone for months, and now she expects them to embrace her with open arms? The whole ‘character development’ of the last 400+ chapters is a joke, makes no sense at all.

Because opposite to what all readers thought, Iris doesn’t have a strong and just character, she has a weak and immature character. She’s not fit to be the Luna of any pack. She has disqualified herself, no excuses.

And after all this pack has been through with her father, she has shown them she is as big a monster as her father, having a young woman brutally slashed to death.

This story is going nowhere, we’re back to gruesome scenes, people beyond help and so on. I don’t really see the point in reading such depressing stuff.

Totally agree. She disgusts me right now. She’s become a murderer.

Well, congratulations, Iris now officially is a murderer. She disgusts me. There’s no excuse for this.

Having Iris turned into a murderer is not character build up. It’s a defamation of character. But let’s wait and see.

No. Not everyone who has a bad youth turns into a criminal. Not everyone who has been bullied turns into a bullyer. Not everyone who has been robbed turns into a thief. And so on. Because they have character. That’ s what Iris also had, but what’s completely ruined now. She’s lost her credibility now she has stooped so low (or even lower, since she knows how horrific being whipped is) as her former tormentors.

This whole thing of Iris ordering that someone be whipped to death is totally inconsistent with everything we’ve read about Iris. It’s completely illogical and ruins her whole character build up. And then the cunning deliberation to have Redmond do this dirty work…it’s downright vicious. She is really turning into her stepfather’s daughter now. Totally illogical. Character development doesn’t mean acting out of character and that’s what’s happening right now. Did the author forget about his carefull character build up?

It would be appropriate to see a redemption arc for Aria, though. Not quite fair to her being the evil witch in the story now, when she had to undergo as much atrocities as Cane and more than the rest of pack had to. Not justifying her actions, but picturing her like this is going a bit overboard, especially since Cane now is the hero of the story, while he raped Iris more than once. Maybe Dexter could be a unexpected factor. Didn’t it say he got to know her over the last months and got attached a little bit?

I wonder whether comments are fake. One of the first three comments said the ending was heartbreaking...the story hasn’t even endet yet!! And beautifully written? It’s full of grammar failures and typos. Nice story? Really? Multiple rape scenes without any warning! Increasing sadistic scenes! What kind of author writes this?! No more coins from me!

Somehow this story is only progressing in a negative direction, the author obviously has SAW aspirations. It already was (too) dark, but now it’s going overboard more and more. A turn towards a positive lovestory would be ridiculous now. Dead End street. No more coins from me.