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This is a bit of criticism hope it’s okay if not ignore it i think the chapters are too short and what the mc is doing always takes long so it takes a couple of chapters like learning a move took a couple of chapters a battle with a random trainer shouldn’t take more then a chapter you should focus on either making the chapters longer or covering more then one simple thing and muti task rather then spend the whole chapter on doing one thing
I cant wait give me a spoiler or a hint please
Wow wait what’s bariar?
Also has a radar
I dunno why but i laughed so hard
He have Rock slide tm use it
Bro cheated not cool
Honestly that wasn’t that impressive
It’s sinnoh it’s cold
Is there a picture of him?
Where did you read it?
How do you pronounce his name zander?