Rayan_Alzahrani_4430

Revoke her s class and next year get it back after she learns how to be patient

Well the story sounds great and the character is good but it’s just not my cup of tea good luck on this fic i hope you have fun writing it maybe i will read it in the future when I’m more open to the idea

Before i get into this is the gardvoir the female lead i find that uncomfortable so can you tell me first before reading it ( I’m not hating it’s just a preference hope I don’t offend you)

Is this pokephilia please no i hope not

What about the beldum?

Didn’t you say it’s a 3v3??? She only used 2

Okay the story has potential but the battles could use some work and what’s with people popping up and saying weird stuff like I’ve been watching it still doesn’t make sense why these champions are paying attention to him he hasn’t done something great or eye catching yet like i said it has potential but it’s a bit predictable

Ohh i hope he have sulong