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1) Use emojis- Ghost_47_35756dCommented[Congrats to me, I got contracted!]
- Ghost_47_35759dCommented" So tell me what do you Desire? " Jayden spoke in a heavy tone, no one else was paying them any attention, as he added.
- Ghost_47_357524dCommented" Damn it! Here, Take my money!"
- Ghost_47_357525dCommentedBut after calling out several famous eye names He knew from the anime, Yang chen decided to give up because he couldn't bear the cringe and embarrassment.
- Ghost_47_357526dCommented[Batch No- 6969
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- Ghost_47_357529dCommentedThe students' behaviors ran the gamut. Isiliraiellyn, the young woman nursing grandiose delusions, was visibly trembling. "T-To think I'd be reduced to this level of fear... Was I, the heir of the demon lord, truly so powerless against the impending malevolence? Kuh! M-My eye! The eye of the demon god is stirring once again! It throbs! It throbs! What do you desire from me, my eye?! Why do you torment me now?! Oh, what? Do you wish for me to merely glance at these insects' papers to evade this ordeal? A most intriguing suggestion! I shall indulge in such an act!"
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cultivation, not horticulture
"We've grown significantly since our breakthrough in horticulture. I used very little strength to murder them." Anna mumbled, her tone full of astonishment. - Ghost_47_35751mthCommented
charisma ;)
Ling Huang is also surprised "Seems like little brother's charizzma is unmatchable." - Ghost_47_35751mthCommented
he was so shocked, the english language went south
" Yo-You is a student?!" Feng Taihong asked in disbelief. - Ghost_47_35751mthCommentedMaster, you have changed your perfume..... and what's that dripping down your thigh?
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change nephew to niece as Zhao Qing is female
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burnt > brunt
" Therefore, you must remain prepared, Jia Hao. Because, If anything happens, as the military family directly under His Majesty's command, we shall bear the burnt first." - Ghost_47_35751mthCommented
change 'insight' to 'incite'
" Someone who can balance His Majesty unrestricted power. However, Zhenhai King can also insight a rebellion at the right time, making the main family fall." Jia Hao made a rough guess. - Ghost_47_35751mthCommented
change 'her' to 'she'
Before her had time to say anything, suddenly her heard several footsteps approaching them. - Ghost_47_35751mthCommented
Shouldn't it be Alice, not Aria?
And it was his eldest sister, Aria, who began to remember the moments of that night. - Ghost_47_35751mthCommented[Failed: had diarrhea all day]
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clench -> purge or cleanse
"Yuan isn't lying to you, by only making love to you can Yuan clench mana from your body, and I think it's about time you become truly his, don't you think too?" Rose spoke to her with a warm smile. - Ghost_47_35752mthCommented
I don't know if the word 'farmer' was intentional, but in the context of the situation she's in, 'cultivator' should be the word to use. Either it made me giggle
After hearing this, Leah glanced at Yuan's attractive face for a while, thinking, 'Become a cultivator, huh? However, in order to do so, I must make a sacrifice, which is insignificant in comparison to the advantages. Once I become a farmer, I will be able to live a very long life and spend the rest of it with Yuan.'