i hate ppl like elijah i hope he dies

its leagues better than him being a simp slave

this is stupid. why would he fold for something he can easily buy? this is just sabrina forcefully making him involve himself like hes a SLAVE

a bodygaurd just defends someone, not act like a servant....

justify it all you want you lose a ton of readers for no reason due to this. I will continue a bit longer but if mc is still pathetic i will drop

mc simping over her is just a big blemish to his character.

the writing quality seems to have downgraded and it also has more errors?

the straight disrespect to do that in someone else's bed. and its also your SONS at that

raven pov is pretty boring ngl

the writing is quite poor and childish.... i'll continue a bit more ig but if there is no improvement and it continues like its written by a 12 yo i'll hae to drop it

there's no way the sister wouldnt not notice something was wrong. not giving him memories is making reading interactions with his family very painful and weird to read thru

how is he the first to destroy it when all his stats are F? that makes no sense also what about previous brandon knowledge? his family will know somethings wrong if he doesnt download memories or anything, and he also instantly knows how to use mana because of system that downloads skill info but not memories? so many plotholes already

F charm? my boy is cooked

other than him being the mc of our story, there is nothing that points to riley being the "True" soulmate for her as compared to lucas or whatever protags name is. Can i ask where you determined this in case im just dumb?

he can't physically train so its time to delve into a new emotion. perhaps disgust?

who cares if his body is breaking down, it doesn't stop until he screams. they never said anything about stopping a test because someone gets injured, so they are technically sabotaging his test.

better be something crazy like 6 or 7

a crazy villainess dragon girl that's obsessed with me? sign me up i'll gladly take MC's spot

Why would the girl want to be reincarnated just after being put to rest tho?

i hope draven dies