I don't see dude speaking a single word after what Ravian did to him

Blud got roasted

Recently finished the 8th Chapter and here are my following reviews for this story. Overall it's a nice story, a breath of fresh air. Really interesting with the concept of focusing on two protagonists rather than one that you mostly see in other isekai stories. Really looking forward with how this story progresses as more chapters get released. Keep up the good work author! Writing Quality 5/5 The writing quality just hits the spot for me, you can just vividly imagine the whole story in your head. The author's ability to foster immersion is truly commendable, making every moment within the story a delightful experience. Stability of Updates 3/5 It does suffer from a slight drawback in terms of update stability. Regrettably, the author has yet to establish a concrete release schedule for eager readers like me to anticipate. As a result, the arrival of new chapters remains sporadic. Story Development 5/5 In a genre where many stories falter due to hasty plot advancement and abrupt time skips, this story stands as a beacon of excellence. The story unravels at a steady pace, carefully nurturing the growth of its characters and their circumstances. I like this kind of deliberate approach as the realism it brought to the protagonist's development hooked me. Unlike numerous stories that begin their journey wielding overpowering abilities, this story takes a more grounded approach, promising genuine character and plot evolution in the chapters yet to come. Character Design 3/5 As much as I appreciate the author's ingenious storytelling and world-building, I must express some reservations regarding the character design. So far they are still stuck with the same character design as they were introduced. I expect to have at least a variety of designs in a fantasy character. World Background There is still not much revealed to the world our protagonists travelled to but with the vivid descriptions and storytelling of the author, it just feels so magical and I love it like that.

Noice.

While there isn't much content yet, I would like to give my honest opinions. The main character isn't like any generic mc isekai out there, but realistically the mc took his isekai too well, a teenager might have freaked out and come to terms later on but our mc took it very well in a calm manner for a guy who got transported to eternal darkness and some light is now telling him he has powers, might this be some form of mental problem? Due to some issues with life or something, maybe he accepted his death and that is why he is right now? He did sound like a guy too tired from life. On another note probs to the detail of the story, I can clearly imagine the settings in which the story takes place. Nothing yet about character design and world background so I'll just give an average rating on that. Will be waiting for future updates.