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I didn't understand, of ras'al ghoul didn't want to fight with the MC why he attacked first and why lady Shiva think that someone that killed a 5000 years old immortal Is in the same league as her daughter when even her can't kill someone like Vandal Savage.
I didn't like the fact that the MC attacked Malfoy in a fit of rage while also ignoring the Slytherin rule of being united outside the common room and that any possible confrontation must be handled internally, I hope this has consequences both for the protagonist and Malfoy.
it's a really good story, at first I was a little scared after seeing the forty prologue chapters but by reading them I realized that they were necessary and that they beautifully introduced both the protagonist's personality and the background of the world. I thank the author for giving me the opportunity to read this beautiful story, I look forward to other chapters.
I really liked this story at the beginning, but the more I read, the more I find plot holes, not to mention the fact that the protagonist makes choices that I don't understand at all, like when he gives the OK to Tom Riddle to enter his mind and show him his memories. It seems impossible to me that he is so foolish despite being raised by Hela and Morgana who are a goddess of death and a thousand-year-old witch.
It's a really good story and I love it but I don't understand something about the MC's memories, did he, by any chance, lose his memories regarding his reincarnation? Because from what I understand he does a ritual to travel to the past but in one chapter he seems to be looking for the reason for his reincarnation, if it's an oversight on my part so much the better but otherwise could you please either tell me the reason or make a chapter to explain it better. apart from this I find the story wonderful and look forward to new chapters.
I don't like the way the main character changes Kreacher because as far as I know house elves need to be tied to the magic of a house or wizard to survive and take joy in serving the house or wizard they serve magically bonded unless they consider their current master or mistress unworthy, but this doesn't seem to be the case with Kreacher since he respects Walburga a lot and has designated the protagonist as his successor.