TheMacGuffinMan
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TheMacGuffinMan10hCommentedTo Prime's surprise, the monster began to retreat, its imposing size allowing only a slow movement. Still, Prime was stunned to realize that the monster was actually obeying him.- TheMacGuffinMan2dCommentedCh 76 Chapter 76 - Red Menace [2]
- TheMacGuffinMan5dCommentedCh 75 Chapter 75 - Red Menace [1]
- TheMacGuffinMan7dCommentedCh 74 Chapter 74 - Hosts
- TheMacGuffinMan8dReplied to DukeCheburekCh 10 Chapter 10 - Torment
- TheMacGuffinMan8dCommentedCh 9 Chapter 9 - Battle for the Carne Village
- TheMacGuffinMan8dCommentedCh 8 Chapter 8 - Preparing for the Battle
- TheMacGuffinMan8dCommentedCh 7 Chapter 7 - Saviors
- TheMacGuffinMan9dCommentedCh 4 Chapter 4 - Adjusting to the New Life
- TheMacGuffinMan9dCommented
Good child.
"Will I be able to protect Dad from the bad aliens?" Ema asked, her eyes sparkling like stars. "I'll be a hero who will save Dad!" - TheMacGuffinMan9dCommented
Adorable.
"But Dad is Dad, right? Why should I be scared?" Ema asked, tilting her head to the side, confused. - TheMacGuffinMan9dCommented
Yay!
Chapter 73 - Telling the truth - TheMacGuffinMan11dReplied to Deep_Pal_2626
Huh? Not sure what you mean by that…
In that moment, Annie experienced a sense of belonging, of human warmth, that filled the darkest corners of her soul, revealing what it truly meant to have a family. - TheMacGuffinMan11dReplied to DukeCheburek
Alrighty then. No problem.
He waved them goodbye and then went to visit Demiurge on the seventh floor. The guardian was a demon in a formal red suit with white vertical stripes. His facial features were that of an Asian man, with jet-black spiked hair, round glasses, and a long, spiky tail. He was created by Ulbert Alain Odle as one of the evilest NPCs in Nazarick. - TheMacGuffinMan11dCommented
Very nice interaction here.
For a moment she thought Momonga would just log out but then came an answer. "I would love to." - TheMacGuffinMan11dCommented
Missing a quotation mark here.
"Ha. Ha. Momonga responded with a cold, humorless laugh of his own. - TheMacGuffinMan11dReplied to TheMacGuffinMan
Ironically I noticed I messed up a bit with my own grammar in my previous comment.
He waved them goodbye and then went to visit Demiurge on the seventh floor. The guardian was a demon in a formal red suit with white vertical stripes. His facial features were that of an Asian man, with jet-black spiked hair, round glasses, and a long, spiky tail. He was created by Ulbert Alain Odle as one of the evilest NPCs in Nazarick. - TheMacGuffinMan11dCommented
I’ve always thought eviler and evilest were incorrect comparative and superlative forms of evil (at least that’s what my schooling taught me). In my mind, the phrases more evil and most evil both make far more sense and have better sentence flow. It’s not a big problem for me just thought I'd mention it. Either way I hope I’ll enjoy reading this as much as I did the original. Keep up the good work.
He waved them goodbye and then went to visit Demiurge on the seventh floor. The guardian was a demon in a formal red suit with white vertical stripes. His facial features were that of an Asian man, with jet-black spiked hair, round glasses, and a long, spiky tail. He was created by Ulbert Alain Odle as one of the evilest NPCs in Nazarick. - TheMacGuffinMan12dCommented
This is good.
"I want to tell you something when we get home... something about me" said Prime, causing Ema to look at him with doubt, while Annie just nodded.