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Nice! Me too.

Thank you so much author! It’s hard for kids like me to read here because we don’t have the money for it.

Is it going to be a harem?

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This is Worthy Babu, well on my phone. 1. Writing quality is pretty good compared to other novels on the platform. My only problem is some quirks in the author’s writing style and the way some sentences just don’t flow well. 2. Updating stability sucks, 1 chap a week just won’t keep up with other authors on the platform. 3. The story development is the best part, the story is easy to follow and hooks the reader right at the beginning. (But then it horribly repulses you later, if you don’t like a certain trope in a novel like me) 4. The character design is okay, the characters are fine, but their interactions are just not that realistic and don’t sound like real siblings. 5. The world is pretty okay with no plot holes, it’s just that it’s a generic, horribly cliche world. That’s it for now, am waiting to see how far the author grows and if they will continue posting one chapter a week or not…