Lewd_Enjoyer
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kinda forgot what dust release was when I commented this
momentarily forgot what dust release was, nevermind
thats a really cool name for what I'm guessing is a pretty average technique
probably should've done that, but I only edited the earlier chapters on wattpad. main issue is that I don't have a proof reader, though you're the first person who's said this is an issue. so I dunno
"The first gate takes the attack head-on, the second reduces the attack's power and the third disperses the pressure, causing all attacks that come in contact with it to lose their power before they can be effective.".such a useful jutsu
I was about to question that too
fair, but it still draws ample suspicion
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why is 9011 at the end of this chapter?
lad, higher dimension doesn't equal the ability to say No to any attacks. you're trying to argue that the average magus could beat the brother gods. let us simply establish, remnants moon. he managed to get into space in a second. so no, they aren't winning
i gotta ask, are you braindead? that take makes no sense
i think it's considered rude to poison the guests
the point isn't that they can do something, but it's simply easier to not mention it and avoid a potential sealing designation. not like that'd do much either, but it would be inconvenient
ah yes, tell people you have a form of immortality...in the clock tower..what a wonderful decision
why would you not Disguise her??? there's such a thing as a sealing designation, and while it'd be quickly thrown out because of zelretch, wouldn't it be easier to avoid it all together?
you can't ignore it, her actions lead to the extinction of humanity
yeah, I know it's supposed to be heart warming, but If my dad tells me as long as I'm in the house, he can hear my every move... nah. that's a bit creepy. just me though. Still a good chapter.
my initial prediction is wrong, but budget almighty... meh
thousand image defence, Record of Ragnarok
no, because it goes against his character. I won't just enjoy a blatant breaking of character.