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True, but remember... He was 11 right there. 'Brain chemistry' and stuff. Cheers.
didn't he like, forgor?
There is that theory... that Gon doesn't have a mother. He only has Ging. The theory theorises that Gon is a nen Baby and was concieved using the Greed island cards. It makes a little bit of sense, considering that Ging made them himself. Also, HxH is full of bs, so it wouldnt be surprising if its true.
remove the "No". Then you have something that actually sounds wise.
Or you may forget the sensation of eating just bread and water after some time.
And then take it away when you got used to it. Do that multiple times and it causes an addiction. You may be able to be manipulated like that as well. Carrot and Stick and all that.
Well, doing that would lead to insanity and loss of touch with reality. Its like a psychopathy speedrun.
Fun fact: The reason Guy is in female form here, is probably because he is on guard against Felix. When he is in female form, his combat abilities are weaker, but his analytical and computational power are a lot stronger. Which means he could very well be partaking in some form of cold war with 'Odin' right now.
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Hmm, you seem very determined to not give him a unique Skill... But that's okay, considering Clayman has some already. The Skill [Memory Awakening] seems to be kind of a low blow though. Just make it [Perfect Memory] (Shions extra skill after getting revived) and add some calibration issues so he gets access to his memories after some time of adjustment (Like Great Sage with Rimuru at the beginning, you don't even need to change anything). Now, with the thing about the well deserved unique Skill. If you reeaally don't wanna give him one, just let the energy for it sit and add it for his next evolution, so he gets something out of it. As the reason? 'Due to Clayman (him) already having unique skills, it just didn't fit in his soul anymore, so it was put in reserve until place was made.' So when the time comes... his are efforts will be rewarded. No bs. Cheers.
'See my other comment' (Sry is little Long) He doesn't need some Rimuru level OP unique Skill. But at least having one is a must. Average? Not really strong? Is OK, they exist. And the memory thing. It doesn't make him stronger. He just keeps his life and knows what's happening. Nothing special. Poeple like Tear, Footman and Laplace can all percieve Souls, even Clayman can. He can even live without his Body and posses a new one with some Soul traveling bs. That's what I mean he dead without mem'ries. Cause they are part of Spirit Body, which means, the others can see when they missing.
This is very good. Has amazing Potential. (I'm serious this can get amazing) The thing about not getting the memories of Clayman and getting no skills after crossing over though... are major plot holes and don't really work in Tensura 'cause Voice of the World. Tensura is a verse full of bs. I have mentioned it in a comment at the end of the chapter as well. Cheers. (Getting no skills is in this context actually more bs than getting a unique one. And having none of claymans memories means he should be 6ft under many times over by the end of the first chapter, which is some mad bs Plot Armor)
Hahaha that's funny! Psychopaths always act like normal people! They just hide themself well, especially in modern times where the law and society have a lot of influence.
Heh. I See this as an absolute win.
And it all... comes together.
He is down Bad...