Mountanification

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

I think this book has a lot of potential. I’d like to see the author put a little more time into forging and adding an additional level of detail to the games. Calling the beast “a moth” or “a mouse” just seems a bit lazy, add some nouns like a “Temporal Void Moth” or “Meta Time Mouse”. Also the stories progression seems a bit off, went from not being able to fight iron rats to fighting a dragon godmod death in like 20 chapters, something like that should happen over 200 chapters. Same with the whole family confrontation, came a bit too early in the story.

Way to many point of views, too much prophesizing to be enjoyable. Let the protagonist live a little before you drag all this garbage out. Author put a lot of effort into the back drop and world building but really forced it down your throat.

Goes from 0 to Edgelord in no time flat. Not a fan of this story, the diction and writing weren’t bad though.

Went from meh to womp womp pretty quickly. MC is an idiot and makes super poor choices. Most side characters are pretty one dimensional but are killed off. Just felt like weak storytelling and author didn’t do much with the skills selected. Hard pass.

Any story that tells you how the entire books will play out in the first few chapters is always middling. Tried to get into it.

Decent read, the last 30:chapters are repeats of previous chapters, so don’t buy them.

Not a bad novel if you can get into it. Stopped reading because the system forces too many choices, makes the protagonist lack any independence. “Take this system quest or die” type of stuff, just not my jam.