Mountanification

It’s not a bad start for the story but I feel like the author is moving through plot lines too fast. Slow the story down a little bit, flush characters out a little more. Read through first 30

The rarest of rare, modesty and sel awareness in a WebNovel hahaha

Spelling and grammar is killing me.

First 40 chapters are fun, thenthe translation changes and makes it unreadable.

Too much filler and the author needs to tone down his racial preferences a bit.