remove '' at the end of the sentence. :)

i say share the link with different people on discord and do reading swaps

I don't think there is a need to completely rewrite it you can just edit out the part you don't like. As a reader, I enjoyed Ashen Sun and want to see it till the end. But then it's the writer's instinct so trust it and make your decision. May it be the best for you I am sure it will be

its a really brave step as a writer and practical also. Good luck! May this break leads you to revitalize yourself and write an amazing book

keep writing

you wrote a very promising chapter although I can understand that killing a character from your book is kinda sad for a writer. Keep writing!

reading this book feels like watching an anime. keep writing

author, we need new chaptersss[img=recommend]

Thank you for such a thorough review

Thank you soooooo much brother

I love the story alotttttttt. it's a story I would read till the end. its so good, I mean I personally loved it and I'm team Ellie. Good luck Author. beat of luck

my vote is for Ellie

Nice start

I'm liking the novel and I'll keep reading till the end,

I enjoyed reading the chapter , thank you for writing

Thank you so much for your review 💗

I really like your story from the first chapter and Although I didn't read the entire story but I have one thing to say for sure that I will keep reading this different and captivating story till the end.

Thank you so much

I hope this curiosity will remain till the end

thank you