I can see the potential in this novel so keep loading the chapters... I encourage you to continue the novel ...................... .................. ............... ............

Upload more chapters ... This novel has good a good story .................... .................... .................... .................... ....................

Bro make novel about this idea ............... ....................................... ....................................... ....................................... ........................

Nice

If you make the chapter longer and make the case short, it will be better. You can only mention the skills. It will save you more time and space for writing.

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Good, I think. Continue until we see the development of events + try to speed up the events and write more words in the chapters...................