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The_Adder1yrCommentedCh 24 Chapter 24.My rebelling wife- The_Adder1yrPosted
the story is great and have high potential if followed and rechecked by pro editor, So author try hard and upload more and more do not give up but still. Can you use more correct grammer or atleast in the spelling,I could surely read it but it makes the story less interesting sometimes you know. Suggest you use grammerly a keyboard which is in the appstore like playstore and it will be more better. I don't mean that the current grammer is bad but it is just not perfect yet.
- The_Adder1yrCommentedCh 11 Chapter 11.Adventurer test
- The_Adder1yrCommented
sometime I have a feeling you are weak
ouch this one hurt..This even though I know that they really want to kill me ,I never expect that they would resort to back stab me I mean literally back-stab and front stab as well. - The_Adder1yrCommented
wow just hack them to pieces or so. ething
We fought the Orc together and As i was just about to end my acting fight,The leader of the mercenary group and the vice captain stab me with a dagger and a sword from the front and from the back. - The_Adder1yrCommented
very harsh this is, I remember healer kun from this you know the Heal giy right
After they said they are sorry for about 100 times I ended their punishment,the easiest way possible - The_Adder1yrCommented
man this is not reeally apprpriate right not so cool
So I just have this brilliant Idea in mind,I take them to the placed that I just came from, Yes it id the Orc village,They were startled to see em at first but,when I throw the girls ,they immediately know what to do, - The_Adder1yrCommented
and there is also a sama ... 😂
The worst thing they did is that they twist the sword and dagger,while saying ..never messed with Our groups,this is for my brother and this is for the shame you cause us in front of the S rank healer sama. - The_Adder1yrCommented
I dont know why but, i just laugh out loud i this
The worst thing they did is that they twist the sword and dagger,while saying ..never messed with Our groups,this is for my brother and this is for the shame you cause us in front of the S rank healer sama. - The_Adder1yrCommented
i like the girl
A day has gone by and there was a lot of people who was dropped from the test s this test was directly done by the Healer herself,Why must she do this type of thing Is this adventurer guild not the best in this kingdom,why is an S rank adventurer like her be a receptionist. - The_Adder1yrCommented
what repair fee..[img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=update]
i would have gave them if they properly suck me like a leach,So I might have manhandled them and used some of them to wipe the wall clean.I even mistakenly break some bones as well and leave 20 gold coin for the repair fee as well. - The_Adder1yrCommented
lol.. deserved it
But I must thank her anyway for saving me the drag for taking second test,As i though she was about to leave,She mentioned that I was targeted by the mercenary team because,I put the mercenary leader's Brother in Bed unable to walk for like a year. - The_Adder1yrCommented
well is it not such agood save..[img=recommend]
She asked me to follow her and told me to pay her 5 gold,well what a broken healer,She said that with this you will not have to go through the second test,which is the mana test,which you obviously would fail as a warrior. - The_Adder1yrCommented
😂nice
Wow this girl is very brave and quiet skilled,Ye I admit that,I might have attacked the man quite seriously,Because I could not control my power after all,But she is good for healing him in an instant,The most surprising thing about this is that She was the receptionist who was sitting at the counter. - The_Adder1yrCommented
haha seriously this is too much . If i was her i would beat you[img=faceslap][img=recommend]
But I just have to ask, If I pay a Million Gold If could become an S rank adventurer, But she does not seem to like what I said and though It was a joke..Only if she has known that I was not joking,But she think am the type of guy who act rich,And seriously hatr me for no formla reason. - The_Adder1yrCommented
🥲🥲Why just why[img=faceslap]
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But not for me, I meed women and treasure the most😅[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
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