hah..... it started great but you ruined it. but why you add unecesary plot like that? and why you respond like that? its better to be silent than asked someone to leave directly. at last read mushoku tensei study how author made clince plot bearable to read, with enough accumulation it will be great novel itself

okay...... mature man in child body trying balet dance......who stupid idea is it? when trying to write smart character but doing some low EQ thing like moron already made me want to stop reading.

why you write with AI style? and why MC is so stupid? i know that you want MC to face hardship but killing someone without preparation like hidding his identity when claimed MC is smart is to much to me plus your poor excuse is stupid move.

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your writing look good when people started using AI for their novel

this just nonsense like plastic rice stuff

its better 1 a day in continue for 3 days if you realease all 3 chapter in same day you will lose power stone ranking because somepeople is busy and forgot to add power stone. Anyway..... thanks for the chapter! thats realy good one on this arc and its keep getting better![img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move]

thanks for chapter

thanks for amazing chapter

youre the best author man! thanks for amazing chapter!

good critique. something giving author slap in the face is better than giving useless praise that will not help author improve his writing

thanks for amazing chapter! creator bless you man!

okay.... youre to heavy to write with AI. for somone that read many book looking at your writing made me sick. use AI for your inspiration or to solving writer block because human brain is better than low end artificial inteligent learning machine. i apreciate your determination but your writing suck

(movie is real) if i am not wrong. its only good manga with this genre

okay its realy good. if you havent read manhwa the movie is real then read it. it have same vibe but this novel fix the problem on manhwa. its good potensial, and i hope author can continue writing unlike movie is real author that on sick leave in covid era that we didnt know he is dead or alive.

okay..... this stock things is b*llsh*t. if you dont know how stock market work its better didnt add it. honestly i apreciated you who want to write but even with system you cant cheat on stock market because MC will made many enemy because stock is zero sum game. mean if you buy stock that will be rising several percent in the future they will know someone buy it because the price is rising and they will sell the stock they have..... its stupid decision man

yeah. honestly now people use AI more for writing not for removing writer block, that honestly grave mistake because everyone do it. unless there AI tools that reliable on the market but reality there none

AI writing is to heavy.can you use AI just as assistan not tools?it made reader sick when reading.If you write books like that you will banned you know?

thanks for the chapter (^^)

its hard to read because there no spacing and other stuff. i think as author you need to see other novel first and decided how your writing style that suit your taste and easy to read to people