half a year.... And to this day I'll stll wait.

finally! !!

Keep up with the good work!

Kyaaaa!! Another chapter thank you!!!💓

Oh my goshh!! Thank you for the chapter, it felt like eternity with all the boredom i have been feeling in the past few days searching for a novel to read but found nothing worthwhile. This chapter made it possible for me to last for the next few days💓!!

Man, i love this. Gonna visit your other stories and see if they are my cup of 🍵. Its probably will, seeing the way you write the characters and story. Anyway that was good man, keep it up💪

Im hook on this. Seriously. Was finding some hxh fanfics but some where MEH and others have like so little chapters (1or2) . Please dont drop this🙏

Pfftt-- OMG this is fking HILARIOUS!!!🤣🤣

JUST GIVE IT A TRY. YOU WONT REGRET IT!. While some grammars are off you can literally easily understand it and the MC's character. like the plot and how its carried by the author so im gonna stick to it of a while.

I love this so much my disappointment of cliff kun is so little if not non-existent. Im glad i clicked this and will hang on and spend my precious time in this as its worth it, It's a Masterpiece deserving of attention

Hmmm... A novel at 9th grade, quite nostalgic. Ok, imma see this out.

All i could say if there was an alternate universe out there and this really happened to a poor teen called Lester then i really pity him. That was such a bad day, and when i mean bad its REALLY REALLY BAD.

I really like it👌. And the grammar is good and understandable and overall I really like the story. The characters are very entertaining too and I look forward to MC's development and how she will use her powers, specially the haki related ones. SO I OBVIOUSLY GOING TO HOOK ON THIS FOR QUITE SOMETIME✨

So I just realized this was dropped but Im not here to comment about that(though i was a bit disappointed) Im here to comment on what my rating about it so far, the story was good, there is no climax thing or anything exciting but as a read it was good and i enjoyed my time here. And i read some comments down there saying author can't take criticism and she/he shouldn't just post it if she/he don't like to be criticized but here is my opinion to that. I understand not many may like a particular story and often rate it bad but i think what is irritating is that people rate it bad then comment sh** that are look just like petty and narrow minded or even st****, they dont read the Authors previous notice on how its going to be like and point out the same questions and criticize things that they should know the answer for if they just read it and understand. Also not every human is has big patience to things just as how some readers are irritable dont expect all writers to have big patience to 'insults'.

Im glad my curiosity took over as i imagined big mom would be in this fanfic and decided to give it a try even though im a bit hesitant because nof the chapters. THIS IS GOLD no A MASTERPIECE 👑