Kanishka_Chauhan_2199

i think you added an exam scene here as in reality your were going on so you put your frustration in here, im feeling the emotions you put in while writing!

Btw, ryna...is she in college or in high school please clear that

This "Oh mister" totally sounded indian to me you sure show your indisn colors😉

You see that the bullied girl was in college and Ryna was a high schooler so can she(riva) say her 'sister' it makes her look too old... Otherwise the storyline till now is greattt 💜and ykw im seriously getting indian 😛vibes like your typos are understandable that its a indian writing it😅

it should not be "were" here