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PDOFBS_Tenshi

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  • PDOFBS_Tenshi
    PDOFBS_Tenshi1mth
    Commented

    Kek

    Ch 27 Compensate
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    Reincarnation of the Strongest Healer
    Games · Idczhen
    detail
  • PDOFBS_Tenshi
    PDOFBS_Tenshi1mth
    Replied to JaxWolf4

    On skibidi?

    Ch 62 Naohiro vs. Mahoraga
    altalt
    Jujutsu Kaisen: Nah I'd Adapt
    Anime & Comics · JaxWolf4
    detail
  • PDOFBS_Tenshi
    PDOFBS_Tenshi1mth
    Replied to ebrahim_bahadeli

    If it makes you feel weirded then why read it?

    Ch 79 Chapter 77
    altalt
    Journey Of Zoro In Another World
    Anime & Comics · Fumiaki
    detail
  • PDOFBS_Tenshi
    PDOFBS_Tenshi1mth
    Commented

    UBW?

    Ch 74 Chapter 72
    altalt
    Journey Of Zoro In Another World
    Anime & Comics · Fumiaki
    detail
  • PDOFBS_Tenshi
    PDOFBS_Tenshi1mth
    Commented

    Keep the pace

    Ch 26 Chapter 25: The Passage of Time – Interlude 1; Dominating the Underworld
    altalt
    The Lost Paradise: The Coming of the God of Death from the Underworld
    Anime & Comics · Maya_Matengele
    detail
  • PDOFBS_Tenshi
    PDOFBS_Tenshi1mth
    Replied to JaxWolf4

    Second

    Ch 46 The Star Plasma Vessel
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    Jujutsu Kaisen: Nah I'd Adapt
    Anime & Comics · JaxWolf4
    detail
  • PDOFBS_Tenshi
    PDOFBS_Tenshi1mth
    Commented

    Is this OFA a better version of the og one or is it the same one?

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  • PDOFBS_Tenshi
    PDOFBS_Tenshi2mth
    Commented

    Take care of yourself first

    Ch 7 Taking a Break Announcement
    altalt
    The Ability Simulation
    Anime & Comics · Immoral_Phoenix
    detail
  • PDOFBS_Tenshi
    PDOFBS_Tenshi2mth
    Replied to Mr_Exclusive_5724

    No problem, if you're serious about improving the story's grammar then you should try using something like a writing AI grammarly or chat gpt

    Ch 11 An old foe
    altalt
    Rebirth of an Immortal Cultivator
    Urban · Mr_Exclusive_5724
    detail
  • PDOFBS_Tenshi
    PDOFBS_Tenshi2mth
    Replied to OP_Supreme

    No problem

    Ch 2 Fired
    altalt
    Solo Leveling: I Am The Only Supreme With the Cheating System
    Games · OP_Supreme
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  • PDOFBS_Tenshi
    PDOFBS_Tenshi2mth
    Commented

    The premise is great if you could improve the grammar/writing style and the way the character speak(that is a bit connected to the grammar) than this would be a 4/5 story for me but because of the grammar it goes down to 2/3 stars, the way you could improve this is by using grammarly chat gpt or other AIs to help you correct your mistakes or have someone read and correct them(like other authors do)

    Ch 8 First Battle, First Kill
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    Solo Leveling: I Am The Only Supreme With the Cheating System
    Games · OP_Supreme
    detail
  • PDOFBS_Tenshi
    PDOFBS_Tenshi2mth
    Commented

    Improve the grammar than it will get good

    Ch 2 Fired
    altalt
    Solo Leveling: I Am The Only Supreme With the Cheating System
    Games · OP_Supreme
    detail
  • PDOFBS_Tenshi
    PDOFBS_Tenshi2mth
    Commented

    Improve the grammar use chat gpt grammarly or other writing AIs

    Ch 1 The Beginning
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    Solo Leveling: I Am The Only Supreme With the Cheating System
    Games · OP_Supreme
    detail
  • PDOFBS_Tenshi
    PDOFBS_Tenshi2mth
    Commented

    Is this yaoi??

    This book has been deleted.
  • PDOFBS_Tenshi
    PDOFBS_Tenshi2mth
    Commented

    Bro make the chapters longer

    Ch 15 Descent of Chaos (11)
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    Spark of the Enlightened
    Action · UncreativeSpoon
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  • PDOFBS_Tenshi
    PDOFBS_Tenshi2mth
    Replied to Anonny_Anonymous

    Go read a book then my guy why you complaining on a fnafiction of an anime that's just stupid

    Ch 9 Sister school annual event?
    altalt
    Yuta Okkotsu
    Anime & Comics · DailyTransmigrator
    detail
  • PDOFBS_Tenshi
    PDOFBS_Tenshi2mth
    Commented

    Improve the grammar and this will be better use grammarly or chat gpt

    Ch 11 An old foe
    altalt
    Rebirth of an Immortal Cultivator
    Urban · Mr_Exclusive_5724
    detail
  • PDOFBS_Tenshi
    PDOFBS_Tenshi2mth
    Commented

    I'm loving this

    Ch 52 Chapter 51
    altalt
    Journey Of Zoro In Another World
    Anime & Comics · Fumiaki
    detail
  • PDOFBS_Tenshi
    PDOFBS_Tenshi2mth
    Commented

    RIP

    Ch 14 Chapter XIV: Return to bending
    altalt
    CYOA: The Multiverse Unbound
    Anime & Comics · Capybarian
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  • PDOFBS_Tenshi
    PDOFBS_Tenshi2mth
    Replied to JaxWolf4

    First.

    Ch 8 Stitches
    altalt
    Jujutsu Kaisen: Nah I'd Adapt
    Anime & Comics · JaxWolf4
    detail