JerkDeger

great grandchildren, technically

Are -> "Are*

I feel like this paragraph would be alot better placed after a short couple sentences explain his relationship with the Pervy Sage that tried some light prank on tsunade. Nothing to warrant immediate death, but worth serious contemplation if they deserve to have a bone or 2 worth breaking.

enough great -> great enough **

for sure bro, if something pops up ill speak up. im here fir the ride and your doing a dawned good job of keeping me entertained.

if they are demonic wings, aint they fleshy like a bats wings?

Then what about different pantheons with gods that havd the same concepts or single gods with multiple concepts? Kronos was the god of time and harvest, Thor, Indra, Zues, or Zojz are all gods of lightning, im sure the criss-cross of influence on just the earth gods alone will be crazy, let alone how the gods of the new world hold up in comparison. On top of all that, 1 other thing I wanna point out is that u should prob use "gods" instead of "Gods" as theirs only 1 "God" from the Christian standpoint but their can be multiple "gods" if u wanna be accurate about it lol.

great chapter bro! im really enjoying the dialog u got going with the creatures learning about their names and i wonder what sort of fuel that will have on their development!!! It's so cool seeing how your world building this so much. I do have a question tho, since we know that gods exist from all the dif pantheons, will any of them be aware of Noah talking about them to his monster club? will the gods and god monsters show favor or take offense for the use of their name being given to less than holy creatures? would be a pretty neat plot point!