webnovel
1654357538596
amaron

amaron

Lv4

one who likes novels, anime, manga, manhwa and everything that leads to waste life

2022-06-04 JoinedGlobal
397.9h

of reading

2774

Read books

Badges
4
Moments
57
  • amaron
    amarona day ago
    Replied to Morfter

    The Ninja World has technology, but on a weird scale. You can find weather-changing technology in the Snow Country, then radio talkies, cameras, screens, Orochimaru's lab machines, Pain's Asura Path is full of technology, Mecha Naruto, and even in simple things like this world has carton milk and cup noodles, which means they also have plastic-type technology and a lot in the Lightning Village, said to have a chakra cannon and a lot. In the original work, all these plot holes about technology were simply excused by the fact that in the civilian part of the Ninja World, you can find proper technology. And by some comparison in data cards, a Jonin can effectively dodge bullets, and there is an Earth-type ninjutsu used by Iwagakure which can harden your body, and it can make ninja bulletproof so gun powder is ancient to ninja world

  • amaron
    amaron14 days ago
    Replied to Hadjii

    Fugaku wasn't even able to enter the competition as a Hokage candidate. Those eligible were the Sannin, Minato, and Fugaku. But to be chosen as a Hokage candidate, you need a referral and support from the Jonin side or you should be from the Hokage-disciple line. Here, Fugaku is neither, so he wasn't even in the competition.no one would support uchiha . After that, in canon, it is shown that the Uchihas eventually put their bet on Minato as Orochimaru is completely a Hokage line for them, so they put their bet on Minato, a civilian born and friends with the clan chief's family.

  • amaron
    amaron14 days ago
    Replied to your_name_9393

    It is not that he is overrated. But as he is going to be killed off anyway, Kishimoto gave him the best stats and feats in his short screen time. Strongest Mangekyo Sharingan genjutsu, good reputation through war, then in one scene where Shisui and Itachi fight Anbu, they made it like both are equally talented, then opening Susanoo with one eye, then world-renowned in Body Flicker, etc. So it is up to fans or authors to hype him up for the convenience of the plot.

  • amaron
    amaron14 days ago
    Commented

    Hiruzen is strong. This guy managed to be called the strongest Kage of his era, even in the presence of Onoki, the Second Raikage mastery over all five elements + all jutsu konoha has access + sealing + forbidden jutsu. As Hokage and a professor, he would have access to every forbidden jutsu that could be learned from the scrolls, plus sealing techniques. And in the canon, it's implied that he's the greatest in combination ninjutsu, though we only saw one scene. In ninjutsu alone, he's a buffed version of Kakuzu without immortality. His summoning beast is also one of the strongest summons for taijutsu, so that's also covered. I don't know why many fics try to discredit him rather than strengthen the MC of the fics. I would rather have a stupidly OP MC than a normal MC with nerfed villains.

  • amaron
    amaron14 days ago
    Commented

    i guess or hope author tried to say byakugan but even then it will be wrong as byakugan gives u x ray vision through chakra it doesn't matter if u infuse it or not author is slipping too frequently in writing and details

  • amaron
    amaron14 days ago
    Commented

    author is using protagonist luck and plot convenience way too frequently. he could have spaced it around month or so worth of story rather than every day nothing major would change giving enough gap for us not to feel this but if it is done right it could be like this mc's power "" to get plot convenience continuously"" as long as event is properly written it will be high risk high reward type transmigration power for mc but it will become too fast paced so idk what to expect. it will be usual shit if it isn't done right.

  • amaron
    amaron15 days ago
    Posted

    This story feels like the author has a clear overall plot in mind, but everything else is lacking. This often happens when a character is transmigrated just before a major event, like the Uchiha massacre or the arrival of the protagonist to defeat a villain and villain is the mc. However, this story diverges from the original, making it an AU. The author should first establish the AU's setting and then build up to the arc. But the writing seems a bit inexperienced. For instance, in Chapter 1, the MC is introduced as a powerful family member with no talent and a strong sister. In Chapter 2, there's a brief outro, and then in the next chapter, the MC gets a wish. Suddenly, in the following chapter, the MC is world-hopping. A well-written story needs a solid world-building, even if it's a familiar world with minor changes. A few chapters should be enough to establish the setting. But here, the AU is heavily implied without proper explanation. Even if the author plans to explore the AU later, they should give readers a glimpse into the MC's life to understand their choices. For example, if the MC is weak but faces no immediate threat, they might choose a world with long-term potential. Conversely, if they're in immediate danger, they'd opt for a quick power-up. The story needs more depth and transitions between plot points. Currently, the story feels rushed, jumping from A to B to C, and then suddenly focusing on a harem member every now and then. A more deliberate pace would enhance the narrative. The plot itself is common but has potential if executed well

  • amaron
    amaron18 days ago
    Replied to ReaderGod999

    I guess if your ability is simple and too straightforward like this, you can tell it openly. At most, for the first few strikes, his ability might be hidden, but it's an exam meant to showcase his strength, so surprise attacks in Bankai tricks are not a good way to showcase your strength. If even after a fight like this, it's not easy to find out about your Bankai abilities, there's a reason to hide, but for this guy, it's better to tell it openly and use fake-out tactics in combat, like Todo from Jjk.

    This book has been deleted.
  • amaron
    amaron18 days ago
    Replied to LT_Ryuu_X

    for that binding part little spoiler below which will help u . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . . .Spoiler: The MC's mother hates Onuki very much and the MC will kill her and go on vacation. Plot: Due to a binding vow imposed by higher-ups, she was cared for, but they simply jailed her in Kyoto high and for her when Onoki was born, her husband died, and she was imprisoned in the Kyoto School and her life completely derailed into disaster. She deeply resents the MC. They have no real relationship beyond weekly visits, so the MC has no affection for her. After the MC feels his power stagnating, this guy will give his mother a choice: forget everything and live overseas, hidden from everything. But she won't accept, as she's too far gone. And for her there no life anymore ,no one has helped her. then MC will kill her after that he will go on a world trip to America, Africa, etc like yuta and yuki.

  • amaron
    amaron18 days ago
    Replied to VIP2001

    In this timeline, 500 million is like 2 billion Berries in Luffy's time. There is no Great Pirate Era. The bounties will only be upped after Rocks and his crew's antics, which couldn't be hidden from the world. From then on, bounties increased. If not, only if you're in the New World or very strong, you will get a bounty at all. If you want to relate it to Luffy's time, then unless you're 500 million worth of bounty, you wouldn't even get a bounty. You'd eventually be killed off. Giving a bounty will also create a reputation and power to form bigger crews for pirates. So, the Navy, as long as the job could be done without many knowing, wouldn't put a bounty to show it to the world