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Kofi_

Kofi_

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canvas in white, red wine and suit

2022-06-03 JoinedAscension Island
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  • Kofi_
    Kofi_2mth
    Replied to Im_LaZy_007

    I'm thinking single fl for now, but we'll see...

    Ch 18 Good or Bad News?
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  • Kofi_
    Kofi_2mth
    Replied to Im_LaZy_007

    The hero is a fighter who specialize in aura instead of mana. And he just watched the memories, not to totally experienced it. To use magic, 'real' experience is needed. Also, there is a first for everything right? Hopes that answers your question.

    Ch 9 First Cast
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  • Kofi_
    Kofi_2mth
    Replied to Albinus_istamar

    it's in the synopsis haha it's not revealed yet in early chaps

    Ch 2 Chaos Descent
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  • Kofi_
    Kofi_2mth
    Replied to Albinus_istamar

    what i mean is so much descriptive words but there are little impact, as you said this is a human fighting for the first time. also try to split long paragraphs too as it will make the fight more engaging. that's just my opinion tho. have a nice day

    Ch 7 The improbable
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  • Kofi_
    Kofi_2mth
    Posted

    The first chapters is a bit boring but it gets pick up around chapter 5. Things get interesting at this point. I like the hardworking mc as he hoard all achievements tho I can't say that he's cheating. We'll see. Keep it up author.

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  • Kofi_
    Kofi_2mth
    Commented

    Man so much descriptive words for attacking rats

    Ch 7 The improbable
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  • Kofi_
    Kofi_2mth
    Commented

    I say he's doing good

    Ch 6 Fear of a fucking rat...
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  • Kofi_
    Kofi_2mth
    Commented

    Finally man, hopefully other readers won't be bored on your info dumping on first chapters

    Ch 4 The connection
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  • Kofi_
    Kofi_2mth
    Commented

    Full of info dumps but ok

    Ch 3 The meeting
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  • Kofi_
    Kofi_2mth
    Commented

    Alright good start

    Ch 2 The email
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  • Kofi_
    Kofi_2mth
    Replied to IKECARODEV

    Uhh I mean restricted characters like chinese, jap, or kor characters. Also, I think your novel has not been vetted yet because of that so I advice removing those

    Ch 2 Cry Havoc, My Friend.
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  • Kofi_
    Kofi_2mth
    Commented

    Now that mc's on a mission but the chap is too long. Split it into 1k-1.5k if you don't want readers to get bored

    Ch 3 The "Two Eights"
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  • Kofi_
    Kofi_2mth
    Commented

    This chapter cleared my confusion but I advice to remove some unwanted characters tho

    Ch 2 Cry Havoc, My Friend.
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  • Kofi_
    Kofi_2mth
    Commented

    I honestly don't understand what's going on but I'm hype yea?

    Ch 1 What Goes Down In The Kura
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  • Kofi_
    Kofi_2mth
    Replied to Captain_doubloon

    Thank you for your honest review! I'll continue to provide more interesting and entertaining events as the story progress.

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  • Kofi_
    Kofi_2mth
    Commented

    Nice fight scene

    Ch 6 Astral Magic
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  • Kofi_
    Kofi_2mth
    Commented

    got me there for a second

    Without any warning, she shouted, "Yes! I am from the past."
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  • Kofi_
    Kofi_2mth
    Commented

    huh? you mean never attempted? I remember the mc's parents being alive..

    Suddenly, she got close to me and put her hands on my shoulder, gripping it hard, "Listen! My father never killed your parents."
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  • Kofi_
    Kofi_2mth
    Commented

    Chill bro you guys doesn't have any deep connection yet

    How am I going to take revenge if he is Alina's father?
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  • Kofi_
    Kofi_2mth
    Replied to Captain_doubloon

    Glad you were enjoying the story

    'Sword of Tranquility second form— Swift Sword' Fia inwardly chanted.
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