Kofi_
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what i mean is so much descriptive words but there are little impact, as you said this is a human fighting for the first time. also try to split long paragraphs too as it will make the fight more engaging. that's just my opinion tho. have a nice day
got me there for a second
huh? you mean never attempted? I remember the mc's parents being alive..
Chill bro you guys doesn't have any deep connection yet
Glad you were enjoying the story