BadassDuck

Bro, the history is made by author...

But here's the problem, 0.01% of a multiversal being is still enough to destroy a Universe. If he didn't want the protagonist to be so strong he shouldn't have given him such an OP character.

As they said here, I don't think this concept is bad. But I think it should only be introduced when the story is more advanced. Because at least for me the Demon Slayer arc is already too long, and getting a little boring, I would prefer it to end soon.

Happier Marshmallow

Space Bound for Taylor

I think you're trying so hard to make him seem like a psychopathic villain that he's become a caricature. He looks like an idiotic, psychopathic child trying to imitate a villain from some fictional work, like it doesn't seem like he's actually evil and has the capacity to do something big. Like he complains about how annoying his sister is, she's going to get in his way and that's why he wants to kill her. Then in the next paragraph he says that he shaped her since she was a child into who she is today... If he shaped her, it was because he did it in a way that was contrary to what he wanted. To get to a scenario where he would have to kill her? You can understand how stupid he seems, and it seems like he only does these things because he has to prove that he is a horrible person.

Yeah... I think that just as there is a warning when the story is a translation, there should be one when the story is made with gpt chat. There may be people who like it, but I just can't read it. Each paragraph has several parts trying to convey emotion to the reader, but done in a way that only serves to add to the word count.

He seems really stupid, he's going to need other people. Why does he think there are clans and organizations all over the world? Because it is impossible to capture everything for yourself. If he is really intelligent, he will know that the best strategy is to have several good subordinates. Strong enough to go against his enemies, but not strong enough to go against him.

Even though I feel like something about this chapter doesn't please me, I have to say that I really liked it. And a few chapters ago someone talked about NF, so here are some cool songs by him. If You Want Love, which I think fits very well into this part of the story. Only, Running, Let you down. There are other good ones too, but they end up getting too much into NF life and saying things that don't fit with Ed story.