Gilgamesh_Kazama

I mean that I don't know English and that I write with the help of translation.

author, I didn't like the beginning very much, but somewhere in the middle I started to like it, so author, keep up the good work. (this is a translation)

извини Брон, я прочёл 8 главу я думал тогда что и дальше так будет, хотел оставить отзыв и уйти, но когда я дочитал его до десяти глав и главный герой начал меняться и становится сильнее, и тогда подумал что из этого что-то получится и не прогадал, из этого получилась очень хорошая история удачи автор (это перевод)

author, you made your main character too insecure, and Kushina too arrogant, so I will say this: I am not satisfied with your story (this is a translation)

author, your story is very interesting, of course very slow but very balanced, I like it, if the author would speed up the events of the development/maturation of the main character a little, it would be very good, but I like this story anyway, so author, don't lose heart and continue to actively post the story, good luck author, you have a very good story. (this is a translation)

author, your story is very interesting, of course very slow but very balanced, I like it, if the author would speed up the events of the development/maturation of the main character a little, it would be very good, but I like this story anyway, so author, don't lose heart and continue to actively post the story, good luck author, you have a very good story. (this is a translation)

author, your story is very interesting, of course very slow but very balanced, I like it, if the author would speed up the events of the development/maturation of the main character a little, it would be very good, but I like this story anyway, so author, don't lose heart and continue to actively post the story, good luck author, you have a very good story. (this is a translation)

author, your story is very interesting, of course very slow but very balanced, I like it, if the author would speed up the events of the development/maturation of the main character a little, it would be very good, but I like this story anyway, so author, don't lose heart and continue to actively post the story, good luck author, you have a very good story. (this is a translation)

author, your story is very interesting, of course very slow but very balanced, I like it, if the author would speed up the development/maturation of the main character a little it would be very good, but I already like this story, so the author don’t lose heart and continue actively post the story, good luck author, you have a very good story. (this is a translation)

author, your story is very interesting, of course very slow but very balanced, I like it, if the author would speed up the development/maturation of the main character a little it would be very good, but I already like this story, so the author don’t lose heart and continue actively post the story, good luck author, you have a very good story. (this is a translation)