Yuu_Yaboku

What he has done with this story is simply incredible and I love it. I just hope that its core is not fragmented like with Arthur in the future. Thank you very much for the wonderful chapter.

Your story is extremely interesting, your characters too (Only the Mc and your female Oc because the Japanese one is a cheap copy of Uchiha and Daphne is always a damsel in distress in addition to being very used) but your power scale, filler, and your breaks randoms are disastrous, you had a story that could have had a good development but by doing it in a hurry you made it OP for both the protagonist and the villains. And let's remember that he is 13 years old for God's sake or was he 14? Anyway, good luck with the continuity whenever you do it.

It wouldn't be bad but I feel that Stark and Ulquirra's styles are different, although both can use attacks from afar and fight up close but only Ulquiorra would become emperor of all One Pice if he wants. Stark is more relaxed but he always wanted to be with people but because he was too strong he couldn't.

Ugh, I'm really liking this story, although only with resurrection would I really be able to master all of One Piece, but for the sake of the plot I don't think it's bad that it's at the vice admiral level. P.S; I would love a similar story but with stark imagine where his king's haki & reiatsu would make it impossible for him to get close to people until he meets roger and his elite or shirohige and they recruit him

So chapters every day that's what he said right? expecting

I'm tired of you skipping every fight the Mc can have. Anyway thanks for the chapter

Perhaps the best thing would be a brief but concise chapter of what happened, where the news reaches various places, their reactions and consequences. Then close for a while until it is restored, anyway I just want to say that I loved the story and even more so your choice of Dragon. (I'm getting tired of everyone loving Canibal) And thank you in advance for so many and so elaborate chapters.

Ugh for a moment I was scared. I'm grateful that he didn't kill him, at least so his name wouldn't be stained by such a repudiated act, although Daemond deserved it, but it seems like a good ending to the chapter, maybe in the future he can remedy things with a sacrifice against Vhagar or something like that. Let's face it, the blacks should have won the dance very easily but they were always "screwed" in some or other way. I would have liked Viserys' reaction to what happened, the usurpation of Dragonstone and Daemon's subsequent attempt to murder his own son.

Would you turn a good character into one full of rage and hatred? well I guess there had to be something wrong

I need action, fights, blood, otherwise it doesn't seem like a fic with Claymore. I hope that the mc shines and that he is no longer so easy for Shisui to defeat. P.S; Will it only be one chapter every two or three days?