Well written. Short story that was to the point in a reference of here and now. Interested in her past and now present continuing on now. What will happen next… need more… I like that the characters have more depth and continue develop in there relationship… can’ wait to read more about them…[img=update][img=gift][img=recommend]

One of the best and well written stories on this app thus far. Very little to no grammar issues. Definitely a good idea to give us her mates point of view. But the foursome debacle was so hilarious!!!!! I really looked forward to each and every chapter that I read. Most importantly, I didn’t fell like I wasted any money purchasing new chapter since it was always good and captivating…. Look forward to what is going to happen next… wish the story was further along before I started to read it…… 5 stars

This is a smut/ incest story about an opportunistic pervert who has a goal and can think quick on his feet in order to get what he wants. I thought this story, especially for its genre plot was done quite well. I don't understand the negative comments b/c you should know what you getting into when you read the title. This story takes you on a pervy adventure... you are shaking your head but can't stop reading it either. very bold and explicit... I like it!