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Hey o/ I’m a Story Writer and Reader, although I do some drawing and piano on the side. Currently writing a Web Novel. Interested? Here’s a link to our discord! https://discord.gg/tTvf4UZVpb

2022-05-31 JoinedAustralia
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  • Dissociation
    Dissociation2 years ago
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  • Dissociation
    Dissociation2 years ago
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    ~Insert Shameless Author comment~ Hey guys! This is my first time writing a full length novel, and it's the product of various ideas and smaller (800 word) stories I've written in the past. I've also gotten inspiration from all corners of the world! Including, but not limited to: - Anime (Mushoku, A Certain Magical Index) - Manga (Tensura, A Wild Last Boss Has Appeared) - Other Novels (The Beginning After the End, The Stormlight Archive) - News - Brain-picking some friends - Games (PSO2:NG, DND) - Dreams Thanks for everyone who's supporting me; both current, past and future~

  • Dissociation
    Dissociation2 years ago
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    I'm more of a fantasy kinda guy, so I may seem to have a small bias here~ But still, this was wonderfully written! :oo The characters are beautifully done, and they feel like they truly belong within the world they're placed in. Their struggles aren't overly dramatic, and you can follow the logical and emotional lines of thought of the characters! The story is also quite hooking! Updates could be more stable though.

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  • Dissociation
    Dissociation2 years ago
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    An amazing tower story! :o Now, I love my fantasy, so this might seem a little bias? Unsure of what the perspective of the opposition would be... anyway! Amazing world design, complete with an Auxiliary section for those who love background knowledge! The characters are well written, and emotionally attachable~ The storyline is progressing well, and is written in a way that shows that the Author probably isn't just pulling chapters out of their ass, and that they've thought through "If this happens, what would happen next? How does this incorporate into the rest of the story? Does it fit?" Only complaints I had were some flow issues -- i.e. repetitive parts that don't need to be there -- and the stability of the updates, they seem to be of varying time between each-other, although I assume they're announced on the discord.

  • Dissociation
    Dissociation2 years ago
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    Not bad, not bad at all. A good story that either stays away from cliches, or tackles them well! The storyline's been thought about before writing allowing for a stable, flowing story. Only real downsides I saw were that the writing could be improved, although it's getting better as the chapters go on -- and the stability of updates, as it seems a bit... random. Characters could use some more development, but they are written in a way you can attach to them.

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  • Dissociation
    Dissociation2 years ago
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    Look, I'm a heavy fantasy guy, so I might seem a little bias -- but hey! I quite liked this one! It's got well written characters whose personalities have obviously been thought-out extensively by the author! At times it feels like you can hear them in the ambient noise of your room, or right next to you! Only major complaint is the quality of writing, needs a touchup here and there.

  • Dissociation
    Dissociation2 years ago
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    Not bad, not bad at all! I do love me some magic :P Overall, the story is epic! Well written magic tied in with an pretty good relationships between the main characters, knitted within a thought-out world, with a ton of mystery sauce on the top! The only big issue I found was that the writing quality had a few errors here and there, but it got better in the later chapters!

  • Dissociation
    Dissociation2 years ago
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    This is definitely a breath of fresh air from all the "Reincarnated as..." stuff, now, don't get me wrong, I adore isekai, magic and all that, heck I'm writing one like that now lol. Anyway, onto the review Well written! Straight from the start sets up the main character well, we get his personality down pat in a smooth way~ The plot flows well, and the technicality of the novel goes quite smoothly with the ingrained comedy! If you've seen it flash across your recommended, or just seen it while browsing, you should definitely check it out! Only problem I had was the writing quality -- some parts need revision.

  • Dissociation
    Dissociation2 years ago
    Posted

    Well... I sure do like these kind of novels, but this one is outstanding! Sure, if this was the first I had read then I would've probably done a full 5 stars, but still, this one had amazing character development, a fleshed out world, and what seems to be a well thought out story, all knitted together with high quality! Keep up the great work!

  • Dissociation
    Dissociation2 years ago
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    Got me interested with the whole "psychopath in the uni" scheme, and although I normally dislike modern-style reads, (I'm a heavy fantasy nerd ^^') This has definitely caught my attention, worth the read! Only problems are a few grammatical errors here and there, and some tense changing, but as the book progresses, they'll improve!