Frans_Toem

Thanks for the next chapter.

When the chapters open the setting of the antagonist actors, please do not forget to describe the conflict. Make the situation raises higher and hotter. Just like the way of real conflicts come to surface.

Hope the author can accomplish the story in more than 40K words. To make it more than 40K words, the author can spread the settings or describe them In details. Enlarge the characters of actors for example. By the way, please continue the story, Author. Really curious the end. Thank you.